I love how you characterized Sesshoumaru in this chapter and made use of Kagura to show feelings. I thought the whole scene was really fitting, it seemed like something that could happen in the anime for me (if the anime had been more focused on Sesshoumaru). :) You definitely haven't lost your style.
I thought the whole scene was really fitting, it seemed like something that could happen in the anime for me (if the anime had been more focused on Sesshoumaru).
It is so nice to hear that, and I'm glad it worked for you in that way. Thematically and in terms of plot, I've tried to stay in tune with the series.
You definitely haven't lost your style.And thank you for saying that. I've written so few chaptered fics; I'm not as comfortable with them as oneshots, and sometimes I can worry about a new chapter, like "Is this the chapter I lose them with and blow the story?" LOL. I've had the ending planned for so long though that I just have to hope I do an ok job getting there. It's like, you know where you're going, but you don't know all the little details to getting there. Certainly a lot of the developments of this story weren't planned at the beginning and surprised me. My very first draft of this story, way back last year when this fic was just going to be a oneshot, didn't include
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I thought the whole scene was really fitting, it seemed like something that could happen in the anime for me (if the anime had been more focused on Sesshoumaru).
It is so nice to hear that, and I'm glad it worked for you in that way. Thematically and in terms of plot, I've tried to stay in tune with the series.
You definitely haven't lost your style.And thank you for saying that. I've written so few chaptered fics; I'm not as comfortable with them as oneshots, and sometimes I can worry about a new chapter, like "Is this the chapter I lose them with and blow the story?" LOL. I've had the ending planned for so long though that I just have to hope I do an ok job getting there. It's like, you know where you're going, but you don't know all the little details to getting there. Certainly a lot of the developments of this story weren't planned at the beginning and surprised me. My very first draft of this story, way back last year when this fic was just going to be a oneshot, didn't include ( ... )
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I'm so happy that you've continued this... ahhh Kagura and Sesshoumaru.
Thank you sweetie it was so good, so very in character...and at least he got to tell her he loved her!
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