Comments | amanuensis1: FIC: The Voice Between (and the monster in green) [Tony/Bruce, NC-17, ~5500 words]

amanuensis1

FIC: The Voice Between (and the monster in green) [Tony/Bruce, NC-17, ~5500 words]

Dec 22, 2012 12:19

First of my exchange fics for the season that's getting posted. This was for avengers_xchng, for alwaysenduphere.

Title:The Voice Between (and the monster in green)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Enticements/Kinks: Submission, frottage, collaring. Implied threesomes.
Characters/pairings: Tony/Bruce (explicit); implied Tony/Pepper/Bruce; Hulk
Summary: Bruce thinks their relationship ( Read more... )

fic, avengers

Comments 2

ariadneelda December 31 2012, 18:51:21 UTC

Oh my gosh, this was so wonderful. *_*

So much better than what I expected from the headers! No, wait, this sounds wrong. I expected something wonderful because, well, it's you - what I mean is that this surpassed even my already high expectations. The two parallel parts of the story, interchanging with each other, and your use of similar sentences for switching between them worked SO WELL. Also, HULK'S VOICE OMG. So fantastic. What a great exploration of Bruce's character, and the relationship between all three of them. Oh, and the lay/lie moment! :D

Not 2013 yet where either of us are but - Happy New Year! ♥

amanuensis1 January 5 2013, 21:10:19 UTC

You're SUCH a dear! ^_^ Writing Hulk's voice--well, I have to say, I never expected I would want to write Hulk's voice, and yet he decided he wanted to be in this, and, you know, when the Hulk has demands you just can't say no to the Hulk! His voice was very clear in my head, though--he doesn't really have language, except for the occasional word that manages to make it in (like Hulk or Tonystark). So his language had to be very simple, to show that it isn't really words in his head. Nor does he understand anything in Pepper's speech; it's all gibberish to him. He has to take his cues from her face and her actions. And he doesn't use pronouns much, so as the story progressed and I felt him getting better understanding of what Pepper wanted of him, he got used to using pronouns more. I didn't have to think about that much! (So what does that say about me? Easier to not use words, and to just smash things sometimes. ^_^ )