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amand_r August 5 2011, 01:01:36 UTC
i have a whole thing! A bunch of short stories that all weave together. One of them is this one.

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paragraphs August 5 2011, 01:46:59 UTC
Mia said it, the casual conversation while they were committing violence is way disturbing. I still think you should write murder mysteries. You'd have the best villains!

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amand_r August 5 2011, 16:42:36 UTC
ha! i need a mystery first!

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elainasaunt August 5 2011, 09:29:41 UTC
I would read that bunch of short stories. I would read them hard.

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amand_r August 5 2011, 16:41:43 UTC
Haaahaaahahaha awesome.

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count_to_seven August 5 2011, 15:21:24 UTC
I think it was the maple syrup line that made me love you.

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amand_r August 5 2011, 16:42:13 UTC
Well, it was either that or asparagus, and really, would Clo know what asparagus smelled like? I think not.

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quean_of_swords August 5 2011, 18:52:14 UTC
They're doing robbery and talking about The Great Gatsby. I hate that book, and I STILL LOVE THIS. OMG. :D I want more of Clo and Whip's adventures. NOW, DAMNIT.

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amand_r August 5 2011, 19:39:27 UTC
Haaahahaha Clo and Whip are bastards. Long live the semi-literate murderers!

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