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topgeargirl2 April 18 2010, 05:41:43 UTC
This chapter was very good.

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amand_r April 18 2010, 14:59:48 UTC
Thank you!

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51stcenturyfox April 18 2010, 06:03:50 UTC
It was true; making alluring noises while you were having an orgasm was impossible for a man. She would mock no more.

Poor, poor Jack. :D :D :D

I only waited months for this. And it was so worth it, BB!

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amand_r April 18 2010, 15:01:06 UTC
UH UH UH UH.

My favorites is when the guy tell s you he's coming: "I'm comeing, I'm gonna come uhgf uh urghshhgg coming."

Thanks, dude. Your face twisted in agony wasn't enough of a clue.

Haahahahah Jack blew himself!

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51stcenturyfox April 19 2010, 03:16:12 UTC
He did that CAUSE HE'S A BOSS! HELL YEAH!

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amand_r April 19 2010, 03:20:34 UTC
"YOU SUCKED SOME GUY'S DICK AND THEN YOU DIED."

"WELL, UH NO..."

"YOU SAID YOU DID."

"UH, I'M THE BOSS."

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elainasaunt April 18 2010, 07:38:32 UTC
SUNDAY PORN! And it was very, very good. Plus, you know, a narrative climax, too - wow.

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amand_r April 18 2010, 15:02:31 UTC
Hasahaaahaha you know thi was supposed to be a Rhys Gwen scene, and therefore a Rhys/Jack scene, but I just couldn't make it work. OLE!

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elainasaunt April 18 2010, 16:39:09 UTC
Oh, well, I have to say, I'm glad. I mean, bodyswapped Jack and Gwen just had to do it, if only just the once.

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amand_r April 18 2010, 16:40:06 UTC
Haahahah, that was what Foxy said!

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missthingsplace April 18 2010, 12:39:20 UTC
I have to admit to skimming over the 'Gwack' but i so loved the rest of this chapter, Jack trying to interact with the coral just made me chuckle so much.

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amand_r April 18 2010, 15:03:19 UTC
Heh. I guess. I don't use portmanteau names.

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curriejean April 19 2010, 01:16:55 UTC
Portmanteau names. So like, if you wrote a Natalie Portman / Pierre Trudeau RPF, you wouldn't call it that. Wait no, that would be "Portmandeau." Fuck.

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amand_r April 19 2010, 01:17:47 UTC
YOU ARE A HORRIBLE PERSON. BUT YOU ARE ALSO LOVELY. SO YOU ARE EITHER HOVERLY OR LORRIBLE.

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curriejean April 19 2010, 01:18:15 UTC
EEE, Ianto and the mastiff, and Jack talking to the coral.

It looked like he was trying to reroute the ventilation in the autopsy theatre, which was probably less about safety and more about odour. - I was thinking about this earlier! When Owen managed not to confuse his crisps-hand with his guts-hand. 'I wonder how the ventilation's set up?'

Jack drew some smiley faces in very inappropriate places on a few of them -- hahahahahhh

Hooray for Jack being psychic about coffeeing the coral. Murphy's what?

The sensation didn't shoot down to her cock so much as the feel of his tongue on her fingers reminded her cock of what that tongue could feel like on it instead. -- Gwen's been reading too many of the articles in Owen's skin rags. Or playgirl or I dunno, on the internet or something.

It was true; making alluring noises while you were having an orgasm was impossible for a man. -- PFFFFFFFFFF. :P Gwen's definition of 'alluring' differs from mine! Wow, I'd actually kind of like to mail you someone for a go. I should probably work on my ( ... )

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amand_r April 19 2010, 01:20:55 UTC
OMG I THINK I PLAYED MY RED HERRING CARD FOR THE YEAR WITH THAT LAST SCENE.

YOU GET ONE A YEAR. THEY COME WITH YOUR TAX FORMS.

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curriejean April 19 2010, 01:30:41 UTC
This is fair.

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amand_r April 19 2010, 02:01:38 UTC
IT IS MORE THAN FAIR. IT'S UHM. UH.

Well, I just liked it. Cheap trick that it was.

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