Fic: Too Close For Comfort (RPS, NC-17, JB, SG, GDL)

Oct 15, 2009 00:36

Title: Too Close For Comfort
Fandom: RPS, GDL, SG, JB
Rating: NC-17 (contains shaving)
Disclaimer: I don't know them, and I never will. This is fictive, and makes to claims to reality, only celebrity and its manipulative construct.
Note: thanks 51stcenturyfox for betaing parts of this! Thanks to sparkle prince(ss) cruentum. Also, the schizoid nature of this is ( Read more... )

fanfic, rps

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wynkat1313 October 15 2009, 06:40:14 UTC
wow. That was amazing. intriguing and hot and sweet all at once.

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amand_r October 15 2009, 07:06:10 UTC
TThanks!

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cruentum October 15 2009, 07:01:25 UTC
Still fucking love this and fucking love that it goes the way it goes because it should and because that's life. And that transition now fully works for me in that one scene, making it awesome.

Love your writing.

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amand_r October 15 2009, 07:08:04 UTC
Haahaha excellent! TONIGHT AT THE GILL-BARROWMAN'S--NOBODY. GETS. LAID.

Gald that worked for you. You isolated the place in which it didn't work, and it wasn't the place I had diagnosed. Therefore, you are mah fic doctor.

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cruentum October 15 2009, 07:59:34 UTC
Prance dance prancing, I am. With sparkle. We sparkle and all. Yeah it was a small mood setting thing really, so nah, am happy to see this like this now. And I like your Gareth's, he's cool, I don't want to like, be mean to him or something. He's all game and relaxed, good one.

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amand_r October 15 2009, 15:50:25 UTC
Aw, he's drunk! You can't take advantage of a drunk person.

You're feeling maudlin, aren't you?

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annemjw October 15 2009, 07:53:27 UTC
I am too sleepy for coherent, as is evidenced by the fact that I just about thought it would be appropriate to comment on this by saying OM NOM NOM PRONZ, but whatever.

Hot! Boys' legs! Awesomeosity! Gemma being coolbeans funtimes even though she is not even in this. Woo!

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amand_r October 15 2009, 15:50:43 UTC
Yay! Woot!

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easilymused1956 October 15 2009, 09:07:41 UTC
Wonderfully moody, erotic and exotic. They each have separate agendas, yet they seem to each get something they need out of the encounter.

Brava!

Renee

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amand_r October 15 2009, 15:51:25 UTC
Thank you!!

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ebineez01 October 15 2009, 11:43:45 UTC
fantastic. Not that I know them either obviously - but you seemed to capture them so well

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amand_r October 15 2009, 15:51:11 UTC
Thanks!

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