Fic: Clicker (NC-17, Torchwood, Jack/Alice Guppy)

[amand_r]

Title: Clicker
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Jack Harkness/Alice Guppy
Rating: NC-17 (sexual slavery, sort of, dub-con)
Author's Notes: For the Porn Battle V: Historical Sex. This didn't suck until my computer ate the good bits. Thanks to angstslashhope and lionessvalenti for looking at this and telling me that it was not made of crap, even if it is. You cannot blame them

Comments

[rm]

More bracelets, yes.

(translation: if I babble about how much I love this, I'll sound like Jack back there with his brain melting)

[amand_r]

I feel so cheated, because I lost some really good stuff, and I think I could do better with the bracelets. I have a thing about sexual slavery. Yeah, it's non-con, but it's...yeah. Damn you, Anne Rice and your lame ass books.

Oh! And thanks! I am glad you liked it!

[rm]

Yeah, word, to all of that. I also have a drink/drug kink that the bracelets managed to hit at the same time (one day I'll have the time and insanity to write some hardcore, Jack training Ianto and using various alien controlled substances to do it BDSM fic)

[amand_r]

NICE. I think I might have been partially been influenced by Spiderine's Close and Holy Darkness, since I just finished that this week.

I would totes be all over that fic, man.

[ophymirage]

Very, VERY hot, even if it's still rough. (and what's wrong with rough? :D)

A quick beta, because apparently I can never turn off my inner editrix any more:

Emily's hand is loose on the back of his neck, and he tilts his head to rub his face into her arm.

Is probably intended to be Alice's, no? Because if Emily were there, and watching Alice "torture" Jack, that would be super-double-hot, but there should be more about her, and watching her partner coming undone while she's sucking Jack's cock, and perhaps ordering her about a bit.

Hmm. A sequel is clearly called for. :D

[amand_r]

d'OH! My internal mess-o-meter is confusing me again! I always think Alice LOOKS like and Emily and vice versa so I confuse them. Once I wrote a whole smutlet with them completely flipped and had to go change it.

I think other people have done the "two sadistic lesbians torture Jack but" with Alice and emily, and that's kind of hot, but sometimes he needs to take one of them out for a spin. Some day he's going to take Alice out for a nice dinner. It will be all sensitive and shit, and she'll be all Liza Dolittle on him. It will be awesome.

Thanks! :D

[bluejeans07]

My brain just melted from hotness. Guh!

[amand_r]

Thanks!

[51stcenturyfox]

Yesssss, a sequel. *A sequel! A sequel!* = claps and squees from the girls at Castle Anthrax!

Brilliant.

CASTLE ANTHRAX FTW

[amand_r]

I....I kind of want a sequel, too. Vengeful first person Jack?

LOLOR5 oops on that first post.

[darthhellokitty]

Oh, yum! I'd love to have been in the corner watching that. I feel like I WAS. So good.

And, yeah, bracelets like that are good to have. :-)

[amand_r]

hAAHAHAHAH THANKS!

THOSE BRACELETS FREAK ME THE FUCK OUT.