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anonymous February 17 2014, 03:37:44 UTC
Wow, interesting. I really like how you kept it natural, kept them laughing, a little nervous, because despite the prompt, they're not porn stars. (e.g. "This dildo isn't as stiff, and her fingers - and his ass - are slippery with lube. It's harder to push it into his body, to breach his opening, and it slips and slides away from her fingers until she's ready to curse, or laugh, or both ( ... )

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alyse February 17 2014, 22:02:34 UTC
I never know if you come back and read my replies to your comments, which is a pity because I am so up for talking about my OTP to anyone who is interested :)

I like my porn to be as much about characterisation as it is about the actual sexing, because if it was all about the sexing, why not watch/read original stuff? I mean, I want to get into the heads of these characters when I'm reading stuff (or in this case writing, since there is so little Abby/King out there for me to read. Woe). I'm interested in them, their dynamic, the little hints about their relationship in canon. I just want more, you know? :D ( ... )

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