Of Fate and Warfare - Prologue

[alydhe]

Okay, this bunny has been bothering me ever since I read icedark_elf's story Thy Willful Enemy. (Read it! btw.) She fed the bunnies so I blame this intirely on her. *sulk*

Anywhoodle, I expect honest opinions here folks. You don't like it? Tell me. You do like it? What did you like about it?

Of Fate and Warfare

Prologue:
A Shinra is superior...

Comments

[vasher]

Ooh, intriguing twists.

Would love to see more of this if you decide to continue. I <3 past ones with Cloud on a more equal basis with the rest of the trio.

And Rufus. Can never have too much Rufus. Thanks for sharing your story. ^^

[drkangelyahriel]

Hmm, I DO like this. I hope you write more.
It's especially entertaining to see the ShinRa bigwigs arguing and trying to one-up each other. XD Too many chefs spoil the broth, though.
I was expecting Sephiroth to be at the meeting. It *is* a military issue, and he *is* General Sephiroth for a reason. I'm sure he's a brilliant strategist.

and finally...
Cloud is Rufus's half-brother?! o_O My brain will be broken until further chapters explain this.

[naylek]

mymymy, cloud's rufus brother?? (mmyum) but seriously you habe to wtire more of this espesially since this is going to be SxCxZ!! YOou have to! YOu hae no idea (ok, maybe you do) how little fics there are about the three of them together and a SxCxZ always make me go week at the knees. *fans herself* dear god, just the tought of the three sexgods makes me hot...

[me_obviously]

This is a fabulous start. I'm just tingling with anticipation. Though I'm rather curious as to how Cloud ended up as a labrat when he's related to the president. Even if Shinra disliked him I doubt he would allow someone like Hojo to mess with him out of prinicple. But I'm sure the reason will make a whole lot of sense once you post it.

And I do wonder how Seph and Zack will feel when someone they've never met before shows up as Zack's equal in rank and starts ordering their men around. I'm also rather hoping Cloud isn't a kid in this, cause that'd be rather awkward for everyone. Update soon, please. :)