LJI Week 1: Black Rainbow

[alycewilson]

This is my entry for LJ Idol (http://therealljidol.livejournal.com), week 1. The prompt is "Black Rainbow."

Comments

[d0gs]

I love the vivid imagery in this!

[numero_nine]

Like has already been said, the imagery is smooth and clear. You paint a beautiful picture. Thank you for sharing! 😁

[roina_arwen]

Beautiful imagery!

[dadi]

I love to read new poetry from you! Yay!

[viagra]

I liked this a lot - short and sweet and a nice picture. I enjoy this contrast between the natural in the first three lines with the man-made in the last three lines. The middle line is a good connector between the two, and jumped out at me immediately when I first read this. Really well done! :)