Solar System

[aluha]

My oh my, first fic in English D:

Ahem. This fic's about what happened while France and Germany were/are trying to fight this present crisis. Tons and tons of thanks to my dear berseker, for beta-reading all this.

Título: Solar System
Pairings: I could say Francis/Ludwig and Arthur/Alfred, but being honest as I am, I have to admit is Francis/Arthur

Comments

[zacloud]

Very interesting approach. I like how you wrote everyone so naturally into relationships as nations, as well as characters. Neat use of the solar system as a theme. And your English is great! :D

[aluha]

Thanks a lot, dear! It's the first time I wrote about these characters, so I'm really happy that you like it :D

[nericarine]

"Ah, well, if there’s something smart you've done, it was keeping your currency", haha true that.

"but sometimes they're so very much alike, because what Francis feels is not pain or sadness or lack of love, but the deepest, most absolute boredom. And that eats him alive."
This is kinda depressing. But very interesting :P and also, I like how Francis kisses Ludwig's hand all the while thinking about wanting to break up and get away from him.

Sorry this isn't much of a review, but I figured I should let you know that this was a nice piece you wrote. :)

Thanks for sharing~

[aluha]

Thanks a lot, you're very kind!

In my headcanon, Francis has so much different feelings he ends up acting a little contradictory :P

Em portuga because I can

[luh_mmb]

Eu adorei seu estilo em inglês também <3
Eu simplesmente amo todas as suas fics <3 qs
É uma pena que eu não conseguirei fazer uma review digna dessa fic ;A;
Eu achei simplesmente lindo e poético.
Achei muito interessante como foi colocado o relacionamento de Francis e Ludwig e achei imensamente fofo quando depois do discurso Ludwig está nervoso e Francis segura a mão dele para acalmá-lo mesmo pensando sobre terminar. <3
Mas definitivamente o que mais amei é como os personagens foram retratados, como nações mas também humanos
E também amei como no fim é Arthur, sendo um pé no saco, que faz Francis se sentir vivo novamente.
Tudo simplesmente muito lindo <33

Re: Em portuga because I can

[aluha]

Você por aqui <33

Muitíssimo obrigada, querida, suas reviews sao sempre ótimas e me deixam pra cima all the time. Centenas de coraçoes para minha goiana mais querida <333 ;D

Acho que o Francis tem muitos sentimentos conflitantes em relaçao ao Ludwig... mas nao dá pra negar q o amor da vida dele é o Arthur-pé-no-saco (pelo menos no meu headcanon heuehueheuheu)

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[weird_number]

I really liked how you fleshed out each of their relationships -- they just make so much sense.

I also love the references to current-day events, like Arthur's veto at the EU summit. Francis's thoughts throughout this were also very interesting -- his frustration at the state of the world is very understandable. I guess I just want to see more fics on interactions surrounding the EU debt crisis, so this is brilliant.

[aluha]

Thank you so much!

I find this crisis very inspiring! I was thinking about writing something about it when I read about England's veto. It looked so typical of him that I couldn't resist <3

[coeurgryffondor]

This was a fantastic little gem hiding in my bookmarks folder. I love that there are multiple ships in this but it has a natural feel to it; you can see the people and the relationships and how they all bleed together. I normally don't like US/UK but the way you show their relationship is fantastic, quiet; France/Germany is high on my list but I've never seen it done so well. The boredom, especially, really captures their relationship. And the France/England always lurking, regardless of the century, really ties it all together nicely. Perfect. :)