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altyronsmaker

Disobedience OOS challenge

Jan 14, 2007 20:30

Four Disobedience drabbles. Enjoy!

Title: Infiltration
Character(s): Connor
Rating: PG ( Connor )

fic, 2007, oos, drabbles

Comments 10

a2zmom January 15 2007, 02:28:15 UTC

I loved the Veruca/Oz drable. I think that's exactly what she thought. And I also really liked the Robin one, it's so rare to read about his childhood.

altyronsmaker January 15 2007, 02:57:24 UTC

Hee! Those are my two favorites from this batch too!

So, I'm glad ya liked em. ;)

denied_heaven January 15 2007, 02:40:28 UTC

wooaah
those were all awesome but the last one?
guh
perfect

altyronsmaker January 15 2007, 02:58:18 UTC

Thankies, chickie.

*smooch*
Varuca is all about disobedience to me, lol!

scarlettlily January 15 2007, 04:47:49 UTC

Ooo these were all great. Connor would not be obediant at first but thankfully he learned, Faith is too cocky to listen to anyone, Robin would want to always know how to protect himself and Veruca would be thinking thay because she is such an animal.

altyronsmaker January 15 2007, 15:13:44 UTC

Thanks for reading. And yes, to all those reasons! Those were my thoughts as I wrote them. ;)

theas_muse January 15 2007, 13:25:46 UTC

Really really adore the last one as well as Spike's 'jail bait' comment. Conor's POV is wonderfully accurate in this. "In the Christian hell". Love it.

altyronsmaker January 15 2007, 15:14:49 UTC

Thanks! I think he'd make that distinction, being that he grew up in literal hell. Glad you liked them. ^__^

spuffyduds January 15 2007, 21:53:58 UTC

Oh, these were wondrous. Loved Veruca especially. Poor Oz--he never had a chance of resisting THAT!

altyronsmaker January 16 2007, 05:15:18 UTC

OH no. That evil little girl knew how to work the animal. Thanks for reading, dearie. :)