Floating (One-Shot)

[altogingenting]

Title: Floating
Author: Charlotte (altogingenting )
Beta: None, of there are any mistakes they are my own
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: G
Summary: “With you I floated so easily…”
Warnings: Hmmm, fluffy angst?
Feedback: Highly appreciated
Disclaimer: I don’t own Muse or anyone/anything related to them, this is pure fiction
Notes:

Just a little one-shot that appeared

Comments

[starlight_myth]

Oh my lawd! That was so beautiful, Charlotte! But the end was heartbreaking. You wrote this so gorgeously and to think you got this idea out of nowhere...Wow!

The high from the gig disappeared just as fast and a dark carpet put itself over us.

That was a lovely metaphor.

With you I floated so easily. I hit the bottom of the ocean, but you continued to float.

*cries* So emotional!

This was amazing! I love these one-offs you write. They are so simple yet so meaningful! Loved this!
*hugs*

[altogingenting]

I'm really glad you liked it :)

"I love these one-offs you write"
*blushes* Thanks a lot!

*hugs*

[deepseabed]

This was sad, but very beautiful.
As time goes, things change slowly, but steadily. And it may not always be good. I think you've written it very well in this piece.

I really loved the quietness and tenderness of this story. Great job. :)

[altogingenting]

Thanks a lot!

[engel_sehnsucht]

Jesus, that was beautiful. It was perfect!

[altogingenting]

Thank you so much!

[sheerpoetry]

Oh. *tear*

Lovely. And the metaphors are so perfect throughout!

[altogingenting]

Glad you liked the metaphores :)

Thanks so much!

[unomusette]

So beautiful, and then that heartbreaking ending..noooooo!

Such a skilful bit of writing - not so many words but enough to conjure images that were strong enough to make the ending devastating. Sniffle.

[altogingenting]

"Such a skilful bit of writing"
*blushes*

Thanks a lot!