Desire & Love (One-Shot)

[altogingenting]

Title: Desire & Love
Author: Charlotte (altogingenting )
Beta: None. If there are any mistakes they are my own.
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: R or maybe NC-17, I have no idea, I’m not good at rating fics
Summary: “Your dark sea blue eyes are dark with lust and desire as they meet mine”
Warnings: Tiny bit of language, sexual content
Feedback: Highly appreciated

Comments

[thekeyholder]

Oh wow, you're really brave to try NC-17 stuff! ;) I'm still afraid of it like a little bunny. :P *hides under table*

I've just realized that I love your stories in which one of the character is the narrator too because it's more intimate and personal, it's very realistic. ;)

Your fingers feel like magic inside me. All those years of piano and guitar playing have given you wonderful control over your fingers, you know exactly what to do to make me moan and long for more.

Hehe, there's a saying "Practice makes the master" which is so very true xD Dom couldn't have more talented fingers to please him!

Keep up the great work! ;) *hugs*

[altogingenting]

"I'm still afraid of it like a little bunny"
Well, I was almost more nervous to post this than my first fic...

"I've just realized that I love your stories in which one of the character is the narrator too because it's more intimate and personal, it's very realistic"
Thanks, I used to find it quite hard to write with one of the characters as the narrator, but I do it more often now and find it easier, so I'm really glad you like it :D

*hugs*

[altogingenting]

Thanks a lot :D

[engel_sehnsucht]

Wow... I loved that <3 memories :)

[altogingenting]

Thanks a lot :D Glad you liked it

[unomusette]

Just beeeyootiful. Sigh. Makes me so glad I joined MS :)

[altogingenting]

"Makes me so glad I joined MS"
*blushes*
Thanks a lot :D

[farawisa]

loved it really much, but there are some mistakes in here, especially the word realise in the last paragraph. it has to be release. at both points you used it.

otherwise great work. loved it!

[altogingenting]

Glad you liked it :)D

And thanks for pointing out my mistakes, I'll be fixing them now :)