Comments | altogetherisi: Fic: Perception

altogetherisi

Fic: Perception

Feb 26, 2010 23:23

The problem was, Seb McFarlane was quite pretty, with high cheekbones and green eyes, everyone likes green eyes. And he did gel his hair, meticulously, and Jamie had noticed that his nails were kept neat, his hands were kept clean. And Jamie had also noticed, and really he shouldn’t have, he should have tried harder not to, but their English ( Read more... )

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azurelunatic February 27 2010, 00:51:36 UTC

Poor Seb. Poor repressed Seb.

altogetherisi February 27 2010, 10:54:27 UTC

Yes, poor thing. I'll let him make out with pretty boys next time ;)

...also, poor Jamie, but he copes well.

insane_duckfish February 27 2010, 04:47:44 UTC

As if I didn't ship Jamie/Nick hard enough... D: I WANT JAMIE TO GET A HAPPY ENDING WITH NICK SO MUCH.

Also, uh, this is really good! :D

altogetherisi February 27 2010, 10:56:58 UTC

Yes, Jamie too would greatly appreciate a happy ending with Nick. Several, in fact...

playwithfyr February 27 2010, 10:43:24 UTC

Have Team Seb icon, will write awesome fic (:

I love it! SEB! I LOVE YOU! and Jamie is awesome and Nick! and yay!

altogetherisi February 27 2010, 11:00:08 UTC

It is totally tricky to write only 500 words, I will have to write a sequel with all the boy kissing that has not been mentioned here... Also, that would give me more reasons to use this awesome icon! But, I'm glad you like it, since it took like, half an hour or something :P

lisaheron February 27 2010, 18:19:08 UTC

Yeah, 500 words...now do you understand my utter fail with my first entry? xD
ALSO, GO TEAM SEB. FTW.
I loved this - loved how Seb got angry at Jamie to deal with his problems, loved the tone - it was very Jamie xD - and loved the way you described Nick at the end.
*pets Jamie and Seb*
(I'd pet Nick, but he might bite me)
(PS:....did I post the link to mine in the right place? I posted it on the originally entry in this com, but they haven't done a last round up, so I'm worried it won't get entered and don't know what to do....*can't get into Chat to beg for advice*)

silentdictator November 11 2010, 04:38:10 UTC

This HURT to read, but the ending was just killer. Jamie's perspective is so clear and sad and just a little snarky, which is a great touch. :D

altogetherisi November 11 2010, 12:08:16 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)