FIC: Marked

Jun 04, 2009 18:34

Title: Marked
Fandom: The Demon’s Lexicon
Rating: PG-13
Words: 6462
Characters: Jamie, Nick, Mae, Alan (and 2 OMCs)
Pairings: Jamie/OMC, Jamie/Nick one-sided, Mae/Alan
Words: 6459
Warnings: References and allusions to masturbation, wet dreams, oral sex and handjobs, nothing graphic. Also a warning that some of this is written in the present tense and some ( Read more... )

the demon's lexicon, pg-13, fic, fic: marked

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omnipresentdmat June 4 2009, 18:20:31 UTC
I FUCKING LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS. DSKJFDKSJF, YOU'RE AWESOME.
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altogetherisi June 4 2009, 20:32:38 UTC
Aw, thank you!

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vandulocity June 4 2009, 22:00:28 UTC
I second this.
AWESOME :D

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star_faerie June 4 2009, 19:47:02 UTC
Wow. That was an interesting read. I admit it had never occurred to me before to wonder what lead them to the brothers.

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altogetherisi June 4 2009, 20:36:22 UTC
Glad you liked it! :D TBH I hadn't really thought about it before I started writing this morning, and then this fic just sorta ...happened. But I liked it and felt compelled to keep going until it was finished.

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brimtoast June 4 2009, 23:47:54 UTC
Loved it. I am incorporating this into my personal canon, unless we get direct contradiction of any of these events. I especially love that Jamie actually gets possessed for a moment before visiting Alan and Nick so he knows exactly what it feels like and has even more reason to be terrified.

And that he feels like Nick is watching him after he is marked, because of course demons actually are watching him, and he correctly associates that feeling with Nick's gaze.

And the way Alan reacts to being touched affectionately, and how that looks to an outsider who doesn't know his situation.

It was well thought-out and a very enjoyable read.

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altogetherisi June 5 2009, 16:27:58 UTC
Thank you very much! I actually didn't think about it all that much other than vague ideas of what interactions I wanted, but I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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wingstodust June 5 2009, 00:22:56 UTC
*.* I LOVE IT. So good so much better than that measly thing i coughed up yesterday gawd I'm gonna have a complex about this and I love how you tie in Jamie's comment from the book where he says Nick reminds him of someone this and *flails* Am bookmarking and reccing this to all, excuse me.

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altogetherisi June 5 2009, 16:30:57 UTC
Icon twins! :D

Thank you for your lovely comment! I had fun fitting in a couple of quotes and things we would pick up but poor Jamie has no idea about.

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adamei June 5 2009, 04:24:31 UTC
Wow, so interesting fic. I love it that it perfectly compliments the canon. Jamie is awesome so it's nice to see things from his perspective. Great work!

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altogetherisi June 6 2009, 10:11:01 UTC
Thank you! Jamie is indeed very awesome.

Other awesome things include your xkcd icon! Adoration.

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