The Butchers' Tale (b)

[kitcountssouls]

General Rating: NC17 [no sex, just other stuff, check warning]
Characters: Xavi Hernandez, Lionel Messi, David Villa, Cesc Fabregas, Andres Iniesta, Dani Alves, Victor Valdes, Sergio Busquets, Pep Guardiola, Gerard Pique, Carles Puyol and Thiago Alcantara; with common FCB pairings, either established or pre-slash, it'd spoil the fic to name them.

Comments

[kitcountssouls]

thank you so much!

i'm so happy that you liked this and found it that gripping. it's what a crime story should be, but i am far from being anywhere near that good ahah.

i'm glad you liked how it was plotted and executed, this was one of those stories that demanded to be written lol.

thank you so much for the awesome feedback :-)))

[kragi]

Nice job! I'm a sucker for good long fics that manage to hold your attention to the end and I liked how some things were just implied rather than spelled out. Thank you for a lovely fic :)

[kitcountssouls]

thank you so much!! i'm glad you liked this, and that you found it gripping. i usually prefer to be more subtle than spell things out, so i'm happy you enjoyed this.

thank you so much for the lovely comment :-)))

[kitcountssouls]

haha, sorry, sorry, a million times sorry! i typically write open endings, so this was as far as i would go on this one. i mainly wanted to write the confrontation of the "minds", and in my mind, catching them and everything else was just secondary to getting to the point of full knowledge and being able to catch them

[loozy]

Masterpiece of a story. The characterization was brilliant and I loved the fluent change between Sergio/Victor and the cops.

Brilliant piece.

[kitty69lover]

thank you so much :D glad you liked this, especially the characters :)

thanks for taking the time to read and comment :-)))

[sorry for posting this with a diff. account]