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Heartbeat - DRABBLE

Mar 12, 2011 12:02

Author: kitty69lover
Rating: R
Category: Drama
Characters: Xavi Hernandez / Sergio Busquets
Length: drabble - 491 words
Warning: N/A
Summary: how Sergio's own goal vs. Arsenal aided their relationship
Disclaimer: initially only in my head; too much to contain it all, so it spilled on the webpage....
Authors Notes: this drabble was written with special extra ( Read more... )

rating: explicit, fic: drabble, slash, type: drama, fc barcelona, xavi hernandez, sergi busquets

Comments 9

sheep_emilia March 12 2011, 10:29:19 UTC

Damn. Damn, it's perfection. I have no words - at least not adequate words - to say how perfect, how suitable, how well characterised and damn touching it is. It's just perfect. The most perfect characterisation of those two, their relationship and Sergio is just...so Sergio.
Perfect.

kitty69lover March 12 2011, 11:34:01 UTC

thank you!! this has been in my head since the game ended and i saw Xavi hug Sergio...

glad you liked it, i'm not good at all with drabbles :|

thanks for the comment, means a lot :-)))

sheep_emilia March 12 2011, 11:35:41 UTC

I think you're brilliant with drabbles, and now you can't deny it (I've got evidence!)
Yeah, I saw that hug and definitely thought Xavi/Busi and the unfortunate goal... but never got to it, glad you did!

kitty69lover March 12 2011, 13:10:02 UTC

thank you, :D i always feel i'm a 'man' of more words rather than less.

you should deffo give it a go, Xavi is almost naturally Busi's perfect pairing (and so is Vic, of course)

elizaberglund March 12 2011, 14:05:34 UTC

Damn! This is briliant! I don't even know what to say! I love it!

kitty69lover March 12 2011, 17:43:37 UTC

ahh, i'm glad you liked this, it was one of those times when words flew out of me :-))

thanks for the comment :-)))

pris_stratton March 22 2011, 05:45:51 UTC

Waaaaaaaaaaay late but this was so sweet. I'm glad I got to see the hug. My favorite is this line:
"He deserves to be forgiven, his unfortunate deed forgotten, I think as I kiss his jaw still set, going down slowly on his neck"

The line about giants and midgets made me wonder, if there is a notice height difference between lovers does it make sex awkward? Hmm...

kitty69lover March 22 2011, 11:07:26 UTC

there's always intransigent people that want to put him to the stake, especially that it's Busi...but Xavi is not that kind of person.

tbh, talking from one time experience, height no longer matters when both are horizontal.

there was this macro of Pique and Bojan with the caption "they could never 69" though.

glad you liked this!! not late at all, thanks for the comment :-)))

vivfairy April 26 2011, 12:55:15 UTC

Oh WOW I only found this now....*ashamed*
I LOVED this! So emotional and I love the way you wrote them! I just... I don't have words for how much I liked this, love, I really don't!*is stunned*
:-*