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La Seleccion Strip Poker Nights - EPILOGUE

Dec 26, 2010 11:26

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gerard pique, type: drama, david villa, javi martinez, type: rom-com, sergio ramos, la seleccion, cesc fabregas, fic: short story, david silva, slash, pepe reina, jesus navas, fernando torres, rating: explicit, victor valdes, xabi alonso, iker casillas

Comments 12

sheep_emilia December 26 2010, 10:54:51 UTC

That was wonderful! I didn't know you were going to tie it all up, but I'm so glad you did! It's all perfect - the sweet, the less sweet and the healthy dose of realism, and it all makes perfect sense too. You got into their heads so convincingly!
Ooh. I love the line about Sergio thinking about what to wear. IDK why, there were lots of great lines here, but this one cracked me up (possibly because I'm like that myself, but I find it funny with others/men)

sheep_emilia December 26 2010, 10:56:51 UTC

Ah, I forgot: thank you for writing this and the whole thing!!!

kitty69lover December 26 2010, 14:33:38 UTC

i felt there was a need for an epilogue, glad you liked it ;DD

i'm soooo glad you think so, i tried to give everyone a 'convincing' ending, because some belong together and some don't, ok! lol

and yes, i loved that line too and it's one of the constant things on my mind. Ramos' fashion sense may be awkward sometimes, but at least it's his.

and no, thank you for taking an interest in this fic!! this was such a plotless project in the beginning.

thanks so much for the comment :-)))

bwc_baby December 26 2010, 12:14:11 UTC

I like the way it ended, well mostly but that's just the Cesc/Geri fangirl in me crying in the corner.
You handled the Davids so bittersweet... Also Javi/Jesus super hot hahaha.
Also I like the journal's new layout ^_^

kitty69lover December 26 2010, 14:51:19 UTC

awww, i'm not goimg to say sorry for breaking up Cesc and Pique because well, ahah, i kind of hate them lol [Pique/Bojan is my otp, so...]

but i understand why you'd be sad :(

glad you liked the Davids, for me, it's over between them, sadly :| and then the least likely pairing, Javi and Jesus :D

thanks!! i needed something a little more lively. thanks so much for the comment :-)))

bwc_baby December 28 2010, 03:01:42 UTC

Geri and Cesc are my OTP but I can read other pairing (they just make me the happiest lol).
I think Javi needs more loving in the slashy world... Or I can give it to him lol!

kitty69lover December 28 2010, 07:50:58 UTC

aahh, i see, i see. my otp is Pique / Bojan so there's the itsy bitsy conflict of interest lol

Javi is rather unloved, i know!! and he's so dorky cute!!

aboutademongirl December 29 2010, 00:06:04 UTC

GAH. I... this is the end? Really? No one-shots set after the Epilogue? DD: it's so sad to think about this ending!

Pique and Cesc breaking up made me sadface magnificently, tbqh, especially you having left it to the very end. I see you ship Krique, and I adore them together, I do, but omg, Fabrique! Glad to see Sernando go well, that's my other favourite couple.

kitty69lover December 29 2010, 06:48:52 UTC

ah, yes i'm afraid this is indeed the ending :| and i was actually thinking of expanding the Sernando plot in a one shot, but i'm not sure i could do them justice...

well, ahah, i'm not really sorry for ending Fabrique the way i did lol, because in my twisted mind, Bojan needs Gerard more :| [i'm pretty much mad!!] so basically the only way i can write Fabrique is with a sad ending lol :| i'm a bad person.

but i'm glad you liked the story regardless :-)) and thanks for the awesome comment :-)))

anteze December 29 2010, 16:26:08 UTC

*gasp* My heart!
I laughed, I cried, I fangirled!
This is the perfect epilogue!
You really tied up all the lose ends and I don't think it would've been better any other way.
Iker and Xabi getting together [Yay!]
Geri and Cesc fighting [I wanted to cry at that part]
The Davids breaking up [Heart broken! D:]
And all the other hook ups and break ups!
Thank you so much for this!! ♥

kitty69lover December 29 2010, 17:54:22 UTC

ahah, aww. :-)) i can only be happy to have provoked such reactions, it's a writer's only dream. ;-))

I tried to give some the closure they needed and well, my evil self prevailed in some fragments too lol

glad you liked them all, despite being a little heartbreaking. to me, after Villa signed for Barca, the Davids were, sadly, no more :|. as for Fabrique, i cannot write them otherwise, but that's mainly because i swear by Pique/Bojan and i'm also a bit mad lol

i'm very happy you enjoyed this throughout and thank you so much for the wonderful and encouraging comments along the way :-))) <3

anteze December 31 2010, 18:19:15 UTC

It's a nice change from all those fics that have "perfectly good news and no drama"
As much as I worship Fabrique, it was a nice change to see a little "trouble in paradise". Besides Pique/Bojan is not to bad either ;)

It was my pleasure, the fic was wonderful and I enjoyed commenting and showing my appreciation for your posts!

Thank you very much :D ♥