Oh. SO WORTH THE WAIT!!! I love how complex you've made it, for all of them, but how it still makes so much sense! And the fucking hotness of it all!!! I feel f-a-i-n-t!
ahah, glad you liked it ;-)) and tbh, this was supposed to be more on the soft, cute, funny side...yet it turned into this! not that i don't like what came out, i love drama lol
glad it makes sense, because i'm not THAT familiar with La Seleccion to know all its intricacies.
i'm always kinda nervous about the smut in this fic, because it's cut with other scenes and doesn't flow, glad you enjoyed it :-)) and thanks for the comment :-)))
Wow, I like it. Poor Davids though. I hope they work things out. And Iker and Pique actually did it. At least Xabi and Cesc seem like they'll still be ok with them.
yay!! glad you liked it!! the aftermaths are usually easier to write, cause they don't involve having to check the wiki poker hands page for every line i write down, but the cutting of scenes is complicated lol
yeah, i feel for the Davids :( irl too ahah sort of.
Iker's been my fav character to write in this whole fic, glad you liked his characterization :D
and there shall be an epilogue as well, wrapping up all lose ends [hopefully]
Well to be honest I've never played poker before so when you say they had a "full house" or a "royal flush" I have no idea what they are. Only when you describe how they feel towards the cards then do I know if they're good or bad. Sorry about that! ^.^"
ahah, i'm even more glad now that you enjoyed the story even without knowing much about poker. <3 it's not easy to learn, i tell you!!! i still don't know the hands by heart lol
Oh it's wonderful :D I've read it some time ago, but didn't have time to review... I like how you made it more complicated than I predicted it to be (lol forgive my crappy English, maybe it's not the best night for me to write in foreign languages ^^") You write really good, clear and all characters are believeable :)
ahhh, i'm glad you liked this :D and don't worry, your English is fine :D
it started as just a fun story, but yeah, it kind of got complicated along the way...ahah. glad you like the characterizations. i've never written SO many characters at once.
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And the fucking hotness of it all!!!
I feel f-a-i-n-t!
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glad it makes sense, because i'm not THAT familiar with La Seleccion to know all its intricacies.
i'm always kinda nervous about the smut in this fic, because it's cut with other scenes and doesn't flow, glad you enjoyed it :-)) and thanks for the comment :-)))
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Poor Davids though. I hope they work things out.
And Iker and Pique actually did it. At least Xabi and Cesc seem like they'll still be ok with them.
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we'll see about the Davids, their situation is kind of special.
yep, i was very tempted to have Iker reject Pique completely, but then i thought this would be a better turn of events.
heheh, well, i can say that Xabi and Cesc understand the rules, and they'll try to cope with the situation. but who knows how it'll all pan out.
thanks for the comment :-)))
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glad you enjoyed this, they're deffo a pairing with potential eheh
thanks for the comment :-)))
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Poor Davids!
I love the detail to this! Iker's reaction is planned so perfectly!
I hope this isn't the last one though...*tears well up*
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yeah, i feel for the Davids :( irl too ahah sort of.
Iker's been my fav character to write in this whole fic, glad you liked his characterization :D
and there shall be an epilogue as well, wrapping up all lose ends [hopefully]
thanks for the comment ;-)))
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*phew* YAY FOR EPILOGUE!
Thank YOU for the story! :D
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i love closure, so the boys will get some. :D
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You write really good, clear and all characters are believeable :)
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it started as just a fun story, but yeah, it kind of got complicated along the way...ahah. glad you like the characterizations. i've never written SO many characters at once.
and thanks!! :DDD
thanks for the comment :-)))
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