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kitty69lover in alterego_lab

Sticks and Stones - FIVE / ?

Sep 22, 2010 20:42

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gerard pique, type: drama, jose mourinho, pep guardiola, thomas muller, yoann gourcuff, genre: au, john terry, zlatan ibrahimovic, cesc fabregas, guti, fic: long story, slash, didier drogba, sergio canales, mark van bomell, theo walcott, xavi hernandez, davide santon, rating: explicit, frank lampard, multichapter: sticks & stones, gennaro gattuso

Comments 9

karneol_vision September 22 2010, 18:32:38 UTC

Uff... heh, I knew from the start that this wouldn't be a story for me, despite the awesome and intriguing setting and plot-idea. Sorry, I believe I'm out :((
As much as I love your Jose... >__<
I've tried not to be one of those who show off their hate for certain players in other peoples entries but as so many others are doing it openly and as I have read about your dislike for Cristiano in that comment to Grace's story recently, lol, I suppose you won't mind if I'm frank and tell you that I really really above all in life hate Guardiola and Pique and now there's Canales... and so despite the thrilling plot-idea and what may still be to come, there's nothing to keep me hanging on (and seeing Jose with someone I really don't want to see him with makes me unhappy >__... I just have no love for too many of the characters and I don't feel much sympathy gathering when I read them, nor interest in their fate. I would just end up judging them subjectively, and might end up thinking things or writing feedback that would be the exact ( ... )

kitty69lover September 22 2010, 19:03:55 UTC

ahah, it's ok. i can totally understand not getting into the story cause of the characters [i avoid reading sernando like the plague, for instance]

when i did the casting, i can't really remember what criteria i had for the rest of the island kids, except for them being fairly young, since i didn't want to have to make up ages too.

and i am deffo glad you're being frank here, it's the nature of things to hate some players and love others so it's totally understandable. so don't sweat it and don't feel bad. indeed, it'd be abnormal to keep reading something you've got no real interest in, so thanks for letting me know this and well, maybe one day i can write something nice for you to make it up for the ~disappointment.

nandolove28 September 23 2010, 02:25:37 UTC

Oh oh oh! I've just caught up and I must say I do quite enjoy this story! :)

I can't wait to see who gets claimed and who doesn't.

Keep up the good work!

kitty69lover September 23 2010, 05:39:32 UTC

oh i'm glad you like it so far. there's another chapter of introductions, and then the *fun* will start and we'll see who gets claimed and who doesn't :-))

thanks for the comment :-)))

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kitty69lover September 24 2010, 06:24:24 UTC

;D I'm glad you like it so far, i hope it can grow even more and become a really good story *fingers crosses* lol

the characters are very important, as i want to make this more about character development than about action. Pique is, unfortunately, a main character, but i hope i can write him in such a way to overcome your dislike ;D and YES Bastian is in the fic, eheheh.

i'm so glad you're enjoying this, your feedback is really giving me confidence i'm doing this right. and don't worry, there will be sufferance for Xavi.

next chapter will be the last of the intro. then the real story will start lol and i hope it comes out right.

thanks for the comment :-)))

g333n September 24 2010, 17:06:02 UTC

Ahhhhhh. Can't believe you included this sexy beast!

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kitty69lover September 24 2010, 17:19:43 UTC

Santon's not even on my list of hotties, but i thought he fits the profile for this fic and he got the part. i'm glad it was an inspired move lol [and he is made to be slashed, so i found it odd there was no tag for him WTF?]

he IS hot and trust me, i do have story arcs in mind for ALL the characters, minor or main ones. so action with someone his own age will most likely happen ehehe.

glad you like this :D it my new pet project. and i hope you'll approve of Zlatan's choice lol.

thanks for the comment :-)))

marie16fh October 5 2010, 15:58:16 UTC

Oh holy, these boys... Cannot be fun ending up at this fucking place! Everyone got such stories. Theo the arsonist! Took my by surprise, but actually loved how he talked so warmly about setting the place on fire.

kitty69lover October 5 2010, 18:57:58 UTC

the island is almost literally a place of perdition and none of these boys are entirely innocent. i tried to make their 'incarceration' at least slightly justified.

and i adore Theo's role in this fic and his past too. glad you liked it ;D

thanks for the comment :-)))