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[Doctor Who] Dungeons & Daughters

Feb 05, 2010 15:50

Title: Dungeons & Daughters
Author: hibernate
Characters/pairing: Donna/Ten, Jenny
Rating: All ages/PG
Wordcount: ~2400
Author's note: Written for a Doctor/Donna Secret Santa ficathon for abbyromana, who wanted adventures with Donna, Ten and Jenny. abbyromana was also kind enough to beta the story for me before this re-post (because I am not above shamelessly taking advantage ( Read more... )

character: jenny (bb time lord), character: tenth doctor, character: donna noble, pairing: doctor/donna, fandom: doctor who

Comments 15

ghraphite February 6 2010, 12:02:19 UTC

I love this. I do. I do. It's frakking hilarious. I briefly considered quoting my favourite lines but then I'd be quoting about 90% of the fic and I'm just too lazy to do that.

You basically had me from the first line (Sometimes I wonder that, too, btw.) but I was a goner with "You threw my clothes into a volcano!" *snickers* And then it just got better and better.

hibernate February 6 2010, 19:25:52 UTC

Hee! Thank you! :D I am secretly very fond of the dungeons. (Or maybe I just like it when our heroes get to suffer a little? Yeah, that's probably it.)

There is absolutely no sensible reason for why Donna's clothes would end up in a volcano, except that it makes me laugh to imagine Ten throwing them in and Donna almost throwing him in after them.

eve11 February 12 2010, 01:51:54 UTC

I love this to tiny bits. "He was a bit rubbish at everything", ha! And the dungeon with the built-in spa! The Doctor, Donna and Jenny are a fantabulous TARDIS team... thanks for giving us a glimpse of them! :D (I still look like that now, grinning this big stupid grin from reading your story) Kudos!

hibernate February 15 2010, 15:42:52 UTC

Thank you for this brilliant comment! :D It's making me grin like an idiot. I don't think I knew how much I wanted Ten, Donna and Jenny to travel together until I started writing this.

batmanboxers February 12 2010, 02:30:49 UTC

This was brilliant!

alsodinosaurs February 15 2010, 15:44:30 UTC

Thank you! *beams* I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

gingerberrycat February 12 2010, 08:20:49 UTC

i love this so hard i'm sweating. yay for family vacations!

alsodinosaurs February 15 2010, 15:55:03 UTC

Ha, I made someone sweat! I think that's good! :D

Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm thrilled you liked it!

darstellen February 12 2010, 16:39:02 UTC

*snort*

This is bloody fabulous; each line topped the next until I no longer knew how to stop laughing. Reading your work is always a thrill, but the humour in this was particularly brilliant. Your laconic style complements the humour, turning each line into pointed understatement and thereby into a firework of wit.

hibernate February 21 2010, 22:51:08 UTC

Be careful there or you're going to give me a big head! :D I actually wish I was a bit more verbose and eloquent, but it just sounds ridiculous when I try.

Anyway, this is probably the nicest thing anyone has said about my writing, ever. I want to ask your comment out on a date and possibly marry it.