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[alreadyknowsyou]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?
So how am I doing with Nodoka? Am I ruining the poor
librarian, or am I doing a good job?
Be it good or bad, please voice any comments, concerns and criticisms here.
(I feel pretty shaky with Nodoka, so even if it's the smallest thing, or a single worrying tag, bring it up!)
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[bloodseal_soul]

I love this thread with Nodoka so much. I can really hear her voice coming through. She's sweet, shy and adorable but not to the point where I feel she'd be easily pushed around. It's a hard balance to strike.

The only concrit I have is a nitpick, and that's just honorifics. Nodoka is really careful about honorifics and which she uses for what people. Most everyone is "san" and Negi is always "sensei".

Other than that, I'm really blown away!

[alreadyknowsyou]

Thank you so much, and I'm glad you're enjoying the thread. I've been wondering if I've gotten all her different aspects balanced, so to hear I'm doing well is a big confidence boost!

Time to start using 'Alphonse-san' then! And I noticed in my last response I used just 'Negi', so thank you for pointing out honorifics to me. I'll do my best to brush up on them from now on!

[squaring]

GURRRRRRL YOU ARE FLAWLESS

is this how crit works

[alreadyknowsyou]

ohmygosh star get out i am terrible

[squaring]

no nope flawless

come let me touch you and your wonderfulness

[alreadyknowsyou]

noooope

but i have no wonderfulness to touch STOP TOUCHING ME ANYWAY THIS IS NOT HOW CRIT WORKS