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Life's Not Fair - Part 2

Feb 12, 2005 16:56

Title: Life’s Not Fair (Part 2)
Author: alqualonde_
Rating: PG-13-ish for language and situations
Pairings: Remus/Sirius, slight Lily/James
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters
A/N: Even I'm absolutely disgusted with Pete.

Part 1 Here

( In the end, it wasn’t necessary for Sirius to transfer, after all. )

Comments 11

miniaa February 13 2005, 00:10:07 UTC

Oooh make the third one quick! Please? ;.; I'm liking this a lot so far, interesting look on Peter too. :D Nice!

<3

alqualonde_ February 13 2005, 17:07:59 UTC

Thank you!

I'll try to write the third as fast as possible, considering I have major exams coming up. :(

momebie February 13 2005, 00:22:02 UTC

Study Schmudy. This is much more enteratining for all of us. :p I like it.

alqualonde_ February 13 2005, 17:09:33 UTC

*sighs* *inner Ravenclaw bemoans the fact that Writer's Block lifted just at exam time*

Thanks! :D

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alqualonde_ February 13 2005, 17:11:18 UTC

Aww, yay! Thanks!

I wanted to portray Dumbledore in ... a slightly malevolent way. Not evil, just ... not all good. He's a complicated man.

And, yes. Peter. *grr*

music_rocks_667 February 13 2005, 02:44:17 UTC

In Sirius’ mind, this was all becoming one convoluted Muggle soap opera.

Oh my gosh. That's wonderful!

alqualonde_ February 13 2005, 17:16:58 UTC

While writing, I was thinking the exact same thing as Sirius.

"Why do you always insist on toying with my emotions?"
*tear rolls dramatically down cheek*
"But, my dear ... I never meant to!"
"Alas, for I do not believe thee."

And ... it's turned into Shakespeare. Whoops.

Don't mind me. I'm odd.

juliette_kelley February 13 2005, 03:10:22 UTC

Oh, my god, this part just killed me:

"Valentine's Day came and went. Sirius and Remus ignored each other. James and Lily spoke with each other, but it was quite coldly.

Peter went on a date with Marjorie.

They all congratulated him, individually."

Your Peter is so creepy, and that characterization makes so much sense-- though I wonder how the group dynamics will be affected after Sirius and Remus realize Peter lied and that James is-- well, a bastard.

I look forward to the next part!

alqualonde_ February 13 2005, 17:20:33 UTC

I don't think the other three will ever find out that Peter lied. Which, perhaps, is why Remus and Sirius are so angry at him later on in the Shack - they weren't just deceived once; it was for most of their later years.

And James? He'll make up with Sirius. It'll just take time. I really don't like him, though. Can you tell?

Thanks for the lovely review!