[XMFC] Fic: The Ruin of Man

[alphera]

Title: The Ruin of Man
Pairing: Charles/Erik
Rating: PG for dark themes
Warnings: Dark!Charles, implication of mind control
Summary: Charles has had enough of people walking away from him. This time, he won't let it happen.
A/N: Alright. So I’ve come across a few Charles-makes-Erik-stay fics, so I set this fic aside at first… but the bunny just kept

Comments

[rougewinter]

oh my gooood. This still breaks my heart the 2nd time reading it. ;A;

I absolutely adore your Charles. You write him so believably IC even though this seems to go against his very moral fibre of not using his powers to make people do anything. The fact that he could, would and DID use them to make Erik (of all people) stay torments his soul but he does it anyway because he's had enough of being alone, of people thinking he's not worth being part of their lives. Oh Charles ;A;

Hearts. Hearts in my eyes for this verse and for you, bb. But you already knew that. ♥

[alphera]

xoxo

Poor Charles. I luff him, but I keep giving him grief. Doing that broke him a not so little bit. Hopefully I'll manage to add more to this verse.

[seratonation]

Omg this was awesome, I loved the slow rise and fall Of Charles life and how people kept leaving, and the end oh man

[alphera]

Glad you liked it! I wanted to write a little fear and insecurity into Charles' character even without the injury, and this thing came out. o.o

[gwendolynflight]

Oh, this is good.

[alphera]

♥ Thank you! This comment made me happy. :)