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Jul 18, 2005 17:59

Title: Catholic Guilt
Author: hawkeyecat
Fandom: Law & Order
Genre: Slash
Pairing: Curtis/Profaci (Never again…)
Theme: G is for Gravity, a grave consequence; seriousness or importance.
Length: 941
A/N: Angsty to make up for the sap that was “An Evening Frozen In Time”. Thanks, once again, to sarcasticsra for the beta.

( Catholics are experts at guilt. )

fandom: law and order, medium: television, g is for gravity (original), genre: relationship, sub-genre: slash, character: curtis/profaci

Comments 47

hawkeyesmartini July 19 2005, 03:04:38 UTC

As Rey Curtis pulled away from his bedmate, the import of what just happened

Juh? Was that supposed to be "impact"? Or is it intended to be import? It obviously works both ways, but I'm unsure.

This is a nice fic. I don't know the fandom well, but I was feeling pretty bad for this guy the way through...I love the last line, though. That...is a really, really nice ending line. b^.^d

subluxate July 19 2005, 03:08:40 UTC

I liked "import" when I was writing it, and "impact" hit too close to the spark word. (Puns are fun.)

Rey is Very Married, like...there is no MASH parallel, really. He did cheat on her once in canon and the story he tells Lennie is based on that. I just spun it completely differently.

I'm glad you liked that ending line, since I was unsure. Thanks =)

sarcasticsra July 19 2005, 18:50:37 UTC

Rey is Very Married, like...there is no MASH parallel, really.

What about Potter?

subluxate July 19 2005, 23:19:16 UTC

Ah, yes, Potter does work. That would be an accurate parallel.

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subluxate July 19 2005, 03:23:07 UTC

I TOLD you it was a weirder pairing.

When Sara read it, she asked how I stayed IC. I haven't a clue; I'm still trying to figure out how I came up with the pairing.

Glad you liked it =)

(Jack/Ed is 60-some words short, but it should be done tonight.)

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subluxate July 19 2005, 04:54:46 UTC

That it was, and I'm very proud of it for turning out well.

*blinks* Did you just challenge me?

Hee. Thank you.

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falloh8 July 19 2005, 04:47:10 UTC

Angst! Sweet, sweet, delicious angst!
I love you for that last line. And the first. And aaaaall those in the middle.
Great fic! :D!

subluxate July 19 2005, 04:50:32 UTC

I LOVE your reviews. Have I told you that lately? Thank you!

falloh8 July 19 2005, 04:55:06 UTC

You're very welcome! :D!

sarcasticsra July 19 2005, 18:53:37 UTC

God, I love this fic. The pairing is cracked out, but it's IC. How did you even do that? I stay by my previous conclusion: is the world ending? Surely the apocalypse is approaching?

Awesome fic. ^^

subluxate July 19 2005, 23:54:00 UTC

Note to self: Read something angsty before writing Rey.

Hee. Glad you liked.