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Edge of Light and Dark, A is for amuck, HP fic

Aug 01, 2005 23:02

Title: Edge of Light and Dark
Author: Ayla Pascal
Fandom: Harry Potter
Medium: book
Words: 538
Genre: gen
Character: Severus Snape
Theme: A is for amuck
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and co. do not belong to me. They belong to JKR. I'm just playing in the universe.
Author Notes: Written for alphabetasoup. Post-HBP.

( Edge of Light and Dark )

a is for amuck (original), medium: books, genre: general, character: severus snape, fandom: harry potter

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curia_regis August 3 2005, 03:26:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

sarcasticsra August 1 2005, 23:14:34 UTC

Oh, I love this. Snape's my favorite character and this has done him such justice. (Especially since I just sporked a really bad Snape Has A Daughter fic on FF.net... man, that was scary.)

Very nice work. ^^

teapot_yo August 3 2005, 03:20:03 UTC

I AM SNAPE'S DAUGHTER.

sarcasticsra August 3 2005, 03:23:04 UTC

According to this story your name is Chasity Turner and your mother basically slept around on your dad with Snape and had a kid. Amazingly, your dad was apparently "a little hurt" but okay with this. What a guy.

teapot_yo August 3 2005, 03:27:56 UTC

True true all true. (Except for the part where uhh YOUR MOM SLEPT AROUND WITH SNAPE. LAST NIGHT.)

My dad actually is quite a guy and yes he does get quite hurt at times but you know he recognizes the sexual pull of a dark-haired greasy master of the dark arts when he sees them and he just hands my mother over. Normally in the morning my mother makes him breakfast (poached eggs, mostly) and he can get past his hurt for my sake. In my Sue-ness, you see, I CANNOT UNDERSTAND BETRAYAL. MY SOUL IS TOO PURE. THE PURITY IS MY NAMESAKE. Note the similarity of my last name to the protaganists of ABC's Full House, which clearly is the most pure show of all time. Danny Tanner and I sometimes get together for SEX biscuits and tea.)

Seriously.

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maryaminx August 2 2005, 00:30:51 UTC

I really like those last two lines. They're something I can imagine him wrestling with.

curia_regis August 3 2005, 03:28:28 UTC

Thank you for the review!

I could imagine that Snape would easily fall into his old ways again. It would be so much easier for him to do that than to continue to be a good spy.

aheartfulofyou August 2 2005, 00:32:24 UTC

Really, really lovely. I enjoyed it a great deal, and Snape. My poor thing. *Snogs him*.

*Clears throat*. Well written, great job. ;)

curia_regis August 3 2005, 03:28:53 UTC

*laughs*

*steals Snape back*

*snogs Snape*

Mine. :p

Thank you for the review! :)

teapot_yo August 3 2005, 03:22:50 UTC

I dig this. I like Snape (a LOT) and this plays into a theory that was kind of hard for me to iron out because I am dumb a Snape-lover AN ENIGMA, and so it was really nice to read something that supports a Snape that I support: recumbent but also kind of defiant because he knows he just did what he had to do.

I like this:

Snape has no illusions that the boy would seek revenge. A Gryffindor revenge, no doubt. Perhaps Potter would challenge him to a duel and Snape would finally be able to show off his full prowess in the Dark Arts.

The phrase "a Gryffindor revenge" is perfectly Snape.

WELL DONE.

curia_regis August 3 2005, 03:30:51 UTC

*grins* HBP really has inspired my muse to write Snapefic. I don't really feel like writing anything other than fic where Snape is most certaintly not evil.

Thank you for the review! 'm glad you liked it.

teapot_yo August 3 2005, 03:34:09 UTC

Snape is not really someone I can write with any credibility at all, but he is a pretty perfect example of a character who got fleshed out (for better or for worse) in fandom more than canon. I am very picky about the Snapefics that I read, and this was pretty much exactly what I like to read.

Side note: I used to know a girl named Ayla. It's a very pretty name.