Drabble.

[alory_shannon]

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Title: Close Enough.
Author: alory_shannon
Pairing: Kakashi/Sakura. Though technically not really, I suppose.
Rating: T, edging towards M, for an adult situation. i.e. probably not for you, David. XD;I don't think I can properly express just how much I love writing things in one sitting. I would get SO much more written if I just did that all the time

Comments

[kirbywarrior1]

I guess we really DO need to talk. lol

Speaking of, how does today look? Like, this afternoon or something? Do you have today off and free weekends on your phone?

And one-shots are ftw. Means I don't have to remember to check them. XD

[alory_shannon]

So since you've read it, DO we still really need to talk? Am I still in for a David lecture for this? XD

Today would probably be fine. I do have today off, and even if I don't have free weekends, I have a bazillion rollover minutes, so it's all good. We might be going to see The Dark Knight (my dad STILL has not seen it DX) later today, but other than that, my schedule should be clear. Just let me know when.

One-shots are FTW. It means I write them and then they're DONE and I don't have to let them linger in the back of my mind and feel guilty about not finishing them.

[kirbywarrior1]

Wow. Holy crap! XD That was... goodness. I didn't think something like that would be for YOU! lol You wrote that really... erotically. O.o But only by giving JUST the right details. And it was also very emotional, too. I love the way you caught that sense of, well, close enough. Or, rather, the past not closed enough.

SUGGESTION TIME! :D

I'd almost just like to see you put "He closes his eyes and they both breathe out the wrong names." before "Close enough." Something about putting it at the end like an epilogue with "Kakashi/Sakura" just seems too cheesy to me.

/SUGGESTION TIME! :D

[kirbywarrior1]

ahem, "...his eyes, and they both..." That's correct, isn't it? Since the second half is an independant clause or something? XD Blasted commas.

[alory_shannon]

Hey now, commas are my homeboys. >[

[alory_shannon]

...I'm a little surprised you read it anyway even after I'd warned you off lol, but I'm glad you...liked it? XD And what does that mean, you didn't think "something like that would be for ME"?

RE: SUGGESTION TIME - ...No. It's not an "epilogue". It's a stylistic thing I've seen done before, and for me it's almost a summary of sorts of how the pairing works (or doesn't work) in that particular drabble.

And I like it that way. XD ...Plz don't be taking this the wrong way, but I can handle choosing my own writing style, mmkay?

[laura_writes]

Imagine my delight when I saw you sprinkled throughout my comments! Where'd you go? *looks around, blinking* we need to caaaaaaallll! ^_^

[wordsworn]

I fail at keeping up with my f-list, so every now and then, I have to go back and get all caught up.

Plus, you disappeared on me, too. I was starting to do that overthinking things thing (i.e. "OH NO WHAT IF HER MOM SAID SOMETHING AND NOW SHE'S DECIDED SHE HATES ME?! DX").

Check your gmail! <333

[laura_writes]

haha, I love you. The end.

[laura_writes]

http://community.livejournal.com/therealljidol/profile What do you think about this? I'm considering it...