This is for Ash.

[alory_shannon]

Title: Myopia
Author: alory_shannon
Genre: Humour, crack, otherwise gen
Rating: G/PG. Nothing objectionable whatsoever. Other than Tobi’s over-the-top cheerfulness, of course.
Characters Featured: Deidara and Tobi; a mention of Sasori and passing mentions of Itachi, Hidan, Kakazu, Pein, and Konan, if you really want to be nitpicky
Summary: What if Deidara

Comments

[kidouche]

Firstly...I haven't read Naruto fic in MONTHS. Consider yourself accomplished. 8D

Secondly...I wasn't expecting this at all, Bek, and it was just a really sweet surprise, you know? (That sounds so remarkably corny, but I do mean it.) Yeah, I'm not the Naruto fan I used to be, but I still enjoyed this. YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT DEIDARA IN GLASSES. XD And just, the entire scenario, with Deidara spending HOURS BENT OVER THE SCOPE and Tobi just waltzing in and being all LOLOL I FIXED IT IN TWO SECONDS LOOK HOW AWESOME I AM was perfect. And the ending, of course, was ACE. Hell, I even liked the Sasori references.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THINKING OF ME, BEK. <333333333333333 This was lovely. ♥ (dude, post it at deidara_un)

[alory_shannon]

Eeeee I'm so glad and pretty relieved too, to be honest that you liked it! <33333 Especially considering how you feel about Naruto these days.

...Hah, I'm just so happy you enjoyed it, I can't think of anything else to say. ^_^;;

Also, and I only just thought about this now, is “Whatever you say, senpai” Tobi's version of "As you wish"? XDDD

[alory_shannon]

Rawr, I need to buy myself a paid account. I screw up my coding too much.

[malruniel11]

LOL

ZOMG

I loved it! Have you read a plot bunny like this to me before, because it seems familiar...

gah, I miss your writing.

(and i'm probly leaving TU this week...)

[alory_shannon]

I mentioned this fic to you before, I'm pretty sure. I started it forever ago (like...MONTHS), and finally just made myself sit down and FINISH IT.

And I miss having you around to bounce fic ideas off of. :C

(Leaving? D: The Academic Affairs people are being jerks, aren't they...)

[malruniel11]

I thought it was familiar. I miss having ideas bounced off me...

(I'm just becoming too stressed out, continuing to get sick and have bad reactions to my meds, I just want to go home and get better and try again another day. My grades aren't good enough right now, I've not been in class... I can't be passing, let alone graduating, at this point.)

[irishmastermind]

DUDE. This was awesome! I love how easily it flows, and how perfectly IC Tobi is. You can just feel that he's this airhead externally but that there is something a lot deeper just under the surface. Also: DEI IN GLASSES.

How've you been? The world treatin' you right?

[alory_shannon]

Any and all of Tobi's awesome in this fic comes from the way Ash plays him over at LSG. Seeing that really helped me get a handle on Tobi, I think. POST THIS OVER AT CHUUNIN, TOO, Y/N? D8 *has anxiety attacks at the mere thought*

DEI IN GLASSES owns my heart. Totally. <3

I have been tired. And trying to avoid RPing and IMing so much recently, because it's been eating my life for the past few months and I haven't been able to write. I've been reading a lot more, and as you can see, easing back on my use of the Internets is helping my writing come back too, be it ever so slowly.

But otherwise I have been doing pretty well! I do need to get on AIM again sometime soonish. I miss our chats--they're hilarious. :]

How about you? :D

[irishmastermind]

Ahaha, so Tobi's awesome comes from Ash, and you are the high-queen-god at voicing Dei, so then that would make these two's interaction this like the offspring of two of my favorite people. XD FUCK YES go post this at Chuunin. I think it will be loved EPICALLY.

NGH. WHY DO GLASSES ADD SO MUCH HOT?

Tired is no good! Though I'm totally hearing you on that one. There needs to be just an extra week somewhere where one only needs to sleep a lot. I've not been online quite as much lately either, and I feel horrible for not playing at all at A9. It's just like, I don't know. It feels like it's dying and all that's left is the death rattle. :/ I'm this close to apping over at gakuen, but I definitely won't have that much time for playing anything until this semester is over and dead

[greenpanic6]

awsome i love tobi he is always so cute dei to

[alory_shannon]

Thanks for reading! :] Glad you liked it.

[robotlove]

"200 metres. Perfect.

Click.

500 metres, and still perfect, goddamn it-"

Man you had me grinning so hard! I haven't read Deidara stuff in a good couple months or so and this was certainly refreshing. Thanks for such a well-written and humorous piece. xD

[alory_shannon]

Ahaha, I'm so paranoid...your icon had me worried for a second there. XD

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and very glad that you found it funny. My sense of humour can be a little weird sometimes, though this came out pretty straightforward.

Thank you for the kind comment!

[robotlove]

Lol oh dear I'm sorry it did occur to me that it wouldn't quite match but that's the only dei icon I have in my LJ at the moment. >.< so I used it.

Forgot to add that they're all very in character and I love you for the mention of Sasori - it even reminded me of one of ormsqueak's nice dA pieces of Sasori fixing Dei's eye. xD

[alory_shannon]

I figured that was the reason you used it after I'd read your comment--I just had a bit of an "D:" moment beforehand. XD

I adore Squeaky. She's amazing. &hearts