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aloriese

fic: maybe, pg

Dec 27, 2011 16:54

Title: Maybe
Rating: PG
Summary: Two days after Christmas, Arthur brings a gift (for Francis) and a hope (for both of them).
Notes: For the FrUK comm's Christmas event. The prompt was 'you're timeless to me'. I'm not really sure how this fits but let's pretend it does.

( Snowflakes float down under the pale light of the streetlamp. )

fluffy like bunnies, rating: pg, fic, francis/arthur

Comments 6

starrdust411 December 28 2011, 04:58:27 UTC

LOL England's gift is so sarcastically sweet. It's just his style

aloriese December 29 2011, 01:24:01 UTC

Thanks! ♥

Originally it was going to be a ring, but then I was like 'no, he wouldn't do that'.

mikkary_bones December 28 2011, 07:54:12 UTC

AHHHH that was adorable! I love the gifts they pick for each other and how (as the first commenter said) sarcastically sweet they are. And also the ending--! Lovely job. ♥

aloriese December 29 2011, 01:26:56 UTC

Thank you! ♥

I'm glad the ending came off well, I was worried it'd be too corny. And they are really saps under all the snark.

oatrevolution December 29 2011, 02:08:46 UTC

Ahhh, too cute! The little frog is so adorable and so them and--

Wow, way to be incoherent. But yes, the title is perfect and after reading your other fic (afraid to leave a comment because it would probably be garbled and I'd cry) it brings hope. Which is really the point of Christmas, yeah?

Anyway, loved it!

aloriese December 30 2011, 04:23:34 UTC

Thank you and I'm glad you liked it! ♥

Ahh no don't cry! I'm happy I got across a sort of looking up-ness in this one, like it's still shaky but it's better. Always getting better.