Additional Note: Apologies if this ends up rougher than anything else. I am absolutely exhausted and chose to do my final edits in a state where I am only fit to go to sleep. *bows head in shame*
He awoke to the sound of voices.
“You have to understand, Mr. Hunt,” Brett’s mild tones came through static. “He was
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I really love this fic, thank you so much for writing.
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You write Gene in a way that I find hard to get into his mind. And that's brilliant because that's how Gene is! - Really good at hiding/faking his emotions (I still can't figure out how he feels about loosing Sam in A2A). I also like how you wrote it as though Sam knows exactly how Gene thinks, not taking offence at all the comments Gene flings at him.
Great line: "Even when Gene, overriding his newly established rule of personal space, reached over and roughly fixed the belt for him, Tyler still looked as though he’d discovered the meaning of life or some sort of shit." LOL!
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Gene's hard for me in some ways and not so much in others. I think I get him completely and then he does something that I don't understand at all. They don't cover how he feels in A2A or is he trying to be all manly? *hasn't seen it for various reasons*
I think Sam would normally take offence to just about anything Gene does (because Sam is that particular kind of personality) but here, as the theme is people switched with Changelings, I rather turned him so he sought the normality of their relationship. :) Dueling Genes and Sams. *could explain it in depth but is too tired to have the right words* :D Heh.
*g* So glad you enjoyed it! So glad that it works. :)
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I like the beginning - at first I was really confused but is such an inventive way of explaining what has happened, really unique.
Still loving your characterisation of Gene and the realistic element of there being an investigation due to the incident but you not featuring on the ins and outs of it.
My favourite chapter still has to be chapter 2.
Thanks for writing this it has been a pleasure to read.
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You know how much I love this fic. The whole thing is fantastic, and I'm so so happy you wrote it :D. The part with the room morphing into the hospital was a really interesting transition, and the ending.... <3 So lovely XD
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