20 minutes fic challenge: An Evening to Remember by PattRose

[pattrose]

An Evening to Remember
By PattRose

Warnings: None
Word Count: 703
Rating: Gen
Genre: Slash
Characters: Captain Maldonado, Richard Paul, Dorian, Rudy, John Kennex and Valerie Stahl. John/Dorian

Comments

[unbelievable2]

That was fun! And a good introduction to the characters for me!
Also, I loved the photo of you and your hubby that you posted! You look great, both of you, so happy! I couldn't see how to leave a comment on your post, though! :))

[pattrose]

Thank you for reading this. :)

I'll change the posting on my LJ about our anniversary. Thanks.

[bm_shipper]

Her name is Valerie, not Valarie... You might want to fix that, since for some people it might be a bit disturbing. for me it definitely is!

Other than that funny story :) Nice work!

[pattrose]

I did fix it. I went to school with a girl that spelled her name like that. So, to me it seemed right. But thank you for pointing that out to me. They are all fixed. I'll remember in the future. Thank you so much for reading.

[daria234]

Aww, lovely. I like the romance, the banter, and Dorian being thoughtful of Rudy too.

[pattrose]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I thought it seemed rather rushed and then I realized, it was rushed. Twenty minutes doesn't usally give me too much to work with. :)

[quirky_thoughts]

That's lovely.:)
Hehe, we both went for a poker game I see. I can so see this happening. :D

[pattrose]

We both could see it happening. I really liked yours. Thank you uso much for reading mine. :)

[stargatesg1971]

Aww, that was really sweet. I don't really slash for these guys but I do love the gentle feel/approach of this one. It's a lovely slice of life, with a touch of romance, good camaraderie and banter. I adore Dorian looking out for Rudy too. Nice job!

[pattrose]

Thank you so much for reading, Beth and commenting. :)