that was your first smut? whoah. okay. this was the first time in a long time that I actually read an entire full-out descriptive smut scene because either people tend to make them too sweet, or too gritty. neither of which appeal to me :/ so, yayes for talent! (though, I think it would hurt like hellquite a bit if Kame was unprepped for that, so that was a wee bit unrealistic >.>)
there actually is an aloe vera based drink called love potion that makes you horny if you drink it. :P
overall, I liked this, and there was nothing about the grammar/spelling that made me wince, so that's a positive thing.
Yup, my very first attempt at smut. :D I'm glad you liked it. You made me feel special. And about the unprepping...I was writing for too long and had no idea how to write the prepping in...so I skipped it. Oops. I hurt poor Kame! >______<;;;
LOL really? Now that's an interesting potion right there. Love Potion that I'm talking about in the fic really does exist though. The lube? My friend found it at Target. XD
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But poor Junno! He'll have trauma or sth for the rest of his life! XD kidding XD
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I didn't mean to hurt poor Junno! He's just such a great victim. m(u_u)m
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lskghja;ghlslaGHJK. YOU WROTE IT AHAHAHA
I LOVE IT AKLSHG;AKG IT IS SO AWESOME. OHHH, JUST LIKE THE PICTURE AND JUNNO'S EYES AND LAKSGHA;KG POOR JUNNO
ILU. ILUSM.
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Yeah, amairo_parasol completely planned out this whole plot, whether she knew that or not. XD Picspamming sure inspires, doesn't it? XD
You make me feel special. ^^
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there actually is an aloe vera based drink called love potion that makes you horny if you drink it. :P
overall, I liked this, and there was nothing about the grammar/spelling that made me wince, so that's a positive thing.
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LOL really? Now that's an interesting potion right there. Love Potion that I'm talking about in the fic really does exist though. The lube? My friend found it at Target. XD
I'm glad you liked it. :D
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