Grimm (x Dante) // 50scenes // 10,000 Times Yes (Part 2)

Jan 25, 2008 14:49

Title: 10,000 Times Yes (Part 2)
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day_eight January 25 2008, 21:21:35 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwww~

I really enjoyed this. It's so emotionally powerful... even more so when it's paired with Dante's POV. Your writing is always awesome, but somehow you never cease to impress and amaze me. Awesome job, and am looking forward to the next parts. <3

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gogodgene January 26 2008, 02:38:34 UTC
Thanks, D8~!

Mine certainly doesn't compare to what gogo is writing for this little series, but I try.

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gogodgene January 26 2008, 02:40:53 UTC
lol, me and Grimm were like ANGST, OMG, WE HAVEN'T DONE THIS IN A WHILE.

Gogo's angst is much better. Grimm and I are very nonchalant about "feelings". lol

((Except when Grimm's saying I love you. Which is just weird in itself.))

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formative January 26 2008, 01:33:16 UTC
I really like how you structured it. It has a stop and go quality that complements the mood beautifully and the final sentence ends it perfectly.

Awesomeness! I'm really looking forward to reading the following parts. ^_^

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gogodgene January 26 2008, 02:42:59 UTC
Aw, thanks~!

My scenes feel dwarfed by gogo's, but Dante definitely has more emotional baggage than Grimm does.

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gogo_ergo_sum January 26 2008, 04:50:09 UTC
you know this totally made gogo tear up and sniffle. you called gogo a "sap." and it's true! this was awesome. you whip up this beautiful romantic stuff...just like that...which totally gives gogo something to word towards.

And could we be any dorkier? You're over here writing "gogo's angst is better" and gogo's over on Dante's scene writing stuff like "gogod posted Grimm's response in this journal. She rocks at romace. Pwns gogo's pervert ass every time."

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kamikaze43v3r January 28 2008, 09:33:56 UTC
Grimm is feeling angsty... and he totally needs to show Dante more love, I think. =D

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gogo_ergo_sum February 6 2008, 08:28:43 UTC
Grimm isn't as angsty as Dante, that's for damn sure. And Big Blue does try to give the little devil some more affection in part 4.

xoxo

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