Take my hand and follow me to a better place [s/a]

[jalexbarakarth]

Title: Take my hand and follow me to a better place 
Author: jalexbarakarth 
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jalex
POV: 3rd
Summary: It wasn't a rare thing, Alex carrying a drunken and sleeping Jack back to his place.
Disclaimer: The usual - do not own the boys, own the plot.
Word Count: 1 933
A/N: haven't wrote anything in a while and wanted to give this a shot.

Comments

[jaseynoel14]

GHFEOHGFODSHFODHSODHO
awwwwwwh this was too adorable <3

'Jack just smiled, not bothering to respond. Alex was so going to carry him up those stairs stairs, and not only that, he was going to tuck him safely under the duvet and cuddle up next to him.
He always did.'

AHHHH, THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER OKAY?
i loved this sooo much, cutest thing ever<3

ohmygosh, i love you :)

[jalexbarakarth]

oh my gosh thank you so much, i'm so glad you liked it :)

i hope it's readable, i mean, i'm trying to reformat it but livejournal is being a little bitch and i can't break up it into paragraphs, so sorry if it's a bit disturbing to read it like this :/

[jaseynoel14]

i know, livejournal always messes up on me :/

BUT! no, it was easy to read and it was just perfect<3
don't be sorry one bit!

thank you for writing such a masterpiece<3

[jalexbarakarth]

ahh, i was able to finally tame lj, success, haha

okay, i'm glad it wasn't a bother :)

no, thank YOU, for being so nice <3

[anonymous]

Dhowifjrkwheififhhd Awwww it was so cute!
And the unicorn bit !!!! xD
I loved this, especially your writing style <3

[jalexbarakarth]

haha, i'm glad you liked it :)

i've had a few comments on my writing style in the past too and i still haven't managed to figure out what's so likeable about it, haha, thank you :D x

[wokeupfromdream]

The last few lines. Perfect. This is great <3

[jalexbarakarth]

I like the last few lines the most too, thank you :)

[alltime_panic]

This was simply too cute for words.
Alex is so good to Jack egbnwnejgne I just can't even

[jalexbarakarth]

aww thank you
yes indeed he is :)

[jalexmylove]

Oh my God the last line
This is adorable
<3

[jalexbarakarth]

aw i love how everyone likes that last bit
i'm gonna go ahead and give myself a pat on the back for that one, haha

thank you :) x