Ch 2 & 3
Title: Open Your Heart
Pairing: Bruce Patman/Rorie Walker
Summary: Rorie Walker wasn't your typical rich girl. She was exactly the oppisite and she had given up on love knowing that it just wasn't for her but upon meeting Bruce Patman she began to wonder if she's met her match or if is she going to end up like the rest of them.
( Open Your Heart: Chapter 2 )
Pairing: Bruce Patman/Rorie Walker
Summary: Rorie Walker wasn't your typical rich girl. She was exactly the oppisite and she had given up on love knowing that it just wasn't for her but upon meeting Bruce Patman she began to wonder if she's met her match or if is she going to end up like the rest of them.
( Open Your Heart: Chapter 2 )
Comments 1
You may want to find someone to beta your story - in other words, someone who will read your fic and point out any spelling errors, etc. I noticed Dairi Burger and Lila Fowler spelled wrong.
I'm not 100 percent sure I like the constant switches in POV, especially from first person - but I tend to be biased more towards writing from 3rd person (he/she) POV, so that could just be my own bias shining through.
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