Pleasantview

[hidden_kitten]

And now for something completely different...

I'm trying for drama. I can't write my legacies into stories no matter how hard I try because I'm usually too busy fulfilling wants and feeding the sims to do anything else. So, I present you with something new and different for me, but nothing you all haven't read before.

Comments

[strange_tomato]

That pic where Mortimer is melding with Dina is so awesome! bawhaha! And Don's the third party? Sounds like a fun honeymoon.

This was very enjoyable. I'm always interested in some good drama, so I'm interested to see where it all goes.

Your makeover of Don is so different from any other that I've seen! I had to read it twice to make sure it was really him. And Kaylynn's gone for her natural hair colour too!

[hidden_kitten]

Mortimer looks good with long hair, don't you think?
Don needs to look more like the charming loverboy that he is, and I think that a tiny goatee and gelled hair really pull it off.
I'm glad you like it!

[palegypsy]

Oh, please do continue! I love Pleasantview, and seeing what happens in different people's games.

[hidden_kitten]

Thank you. I need the encouragement because this is actually pretty hard for me to write!
I'm working on Chapters 2 and 3 right now (um, yes, simultaneously), so at last one of them should be up by Friday. Who knows, maybe tonight ;)

[cityofeden]

I really like this. I adore Don's makeover too and I really couldn't tell it was him at first.

This story is pretty unique from the other stories of Maxis created sims especially Pleasantville so you're doing it right! ^_^

[hidden_kitten]

Thank you! The next installment's up (I just reread it and I'm excited to see reactions) and I think I have the next two ready to post...just a few spelling errors and maybe add more details. I'm having a blast.