FIC: KHR! - Cold Case

[amcw177]

Title: Cold Case

Fandom & Pairing: Katekyo Hitman Reborn, none
Characters: TYL!Gokudera, TYL!Mukuro, one OC
Genre: Humour, Crack
Rating: PG for the mention of the undead?
Word count: ~ 2,270
Disclaimer: Owning these would certainly make my day but alas, I do not. No money made.
Beta: None, hence you may come across the occasional error which I

Comments

[knife_bitch]

This. Was epic.

I like how Lorenzo worked on a "STAKE NOW, THEN I WON'T NEED TO ASK QUESTIONS" basis~

I can't stop giggling dskjfnsdgdf

[amcw177]

Wow, you are fast! :D I haven't even posted this anywhere but here yet. You're awesome.

ROFL Well, I figure he's not too keen on asking Mukuro any questions.

Thank you very much! I'm glad it turned out as lulzy as I had hoped :)

[knife_bitch]

I just check my f-list religiously, nothing awesome about it~

Or staying close long enough for Mukuro to ask questions either, doubtless.

Oh Gokudera. "He's a good vampire." <3

IT WAS. DEFINITELY.

[amcw177]

Well, it's awesome in my book :)

LOL It would have definitely disturbed poor Lorenzo if Mukuro had suddenly started asking questions in person.

[snapdraw_gone]

I can't even think of a way to write how much I'm laughing right now. 'ROFLMAO' and keyboard smashing just isn't enough to convey how much WIN I think this story is.

My, my, how mature you've become, Gokudera. XDDD The younger you would have bombed the poor guy's ass to the next realm.

I really love the part where he starts ranting that Gokudera's under Mukuro's mind control. XDD And the blood peace offerings. XDDD

[snapdraw_gone]

I just realized: ... why does Mukuro stare at Gokudera's neck a lot...?

[amcw177]

Because he can. And to add to the general uneasiness in his presence ;)

[snapdraw_gone]

Ah, I see. ^^ I thought it was because of this (Panel on the bottom right hand corner. =P).

[lifetocome]

I can't tell you how much I love this story. Not because of the EPIC CRACK in it, but the way Gokudera and Mukuro are having mature conversations. *mems*

Just a side note: the comma goes inside the quotation marks in dialogs. <3

[amcw177]

Aw, thank you! \o/ I hope it doesn't seem too OOC... but I figured they do grow up a bit over time and hence should be able to be in one room for five minutes without trying to kill each other :D

Oy... commas - the bane of my existence *headdesk* A friend recently tried to explain those rules to me but I'm afraid all she managed to do was to confuse me even further. Thanks so much for pointing it out. I hope I caught them all when I went to fix it.

[runesque]

I... I frigging love this. The beginning is already pretty epic on its own, then "Mukuro is a good vampire" happened XDDD. I love how Goku's all "Mukuro has a license to be weird, okay?" and how Lorenzo is so well-meaning it's frustrating XD. afahkjfha now I'm going to read through it again.

Thanks for writing this, eee~ *mem's*

[amcw177]

Mukuro has a license to be weird
ROFL Oh, indeed he has.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you found it enjoyable ♥

[dicks]

Lol. Wins!

[amcw177]

ROFL Thank you! :)