FIC: KHR! - One more night and one more time

Apr 19, 2011 14:54

Title: One more night and one more time

Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Pairings/Characters: 1880/8018, Lambo, I-Pin
Rating: R? Possibly scratching on NC-17's door.
Genre: PWE - Porn With Explanation, humour
Word count: 3,072 words

Summary: Yamamoto Takeshi didn't know he was a pervert until he discovers the wonders of video cameras, the internet ( Read more... )

fic: one-shot, fic: katekyo hitman reborn, fic: au

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andreaphobia April 19 2011, 12:56:56 UTC
I already told you what I think, but just for kicks:

I FUCKING LOVE THIS OK, LOVE IT. So many little details I love, i-pin being evil, lambo being pathetic & whipped & reciting what i-pin told him to say, gokudera's theater group, yamamoto jacking off to the video in the middle of the night, THE WAY THEY ARE LIVING TOGETHER OH SO COMFORTABLY LIKE AN OLD MARRIED COUPLE, the way hibari sleepssssssssssss oh my god, if I quoted you the lines I liked I would end up quoting half the fic at you

maybe I should do that anyway

STAY RIGHT THERE

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A MORE DETAILED REVIEW of sorts anyway andreaphobia April 19 2011, 13:07:54 UTC
okay here we go

It's not that he's tired of their sex life, really, he isn't. How could anyone get tired of banging Kyouya? Not possible. Takeshi figures that would be like living in El Dorado and craving the stark, grey streets of a monotonous metropolis.

i swear to god this line sets the tone for the entire fic

It's like he craves proof that it's indeed him who makes Kyouya's mouth part in silent cries and who causes his body to writhe in between their tangled sheets.

;__; oh yamamoto you insecure little bitch you ;____; he loves you ok, he loves you to death

Some days the scratch marks on his back are just not enough. Especially because he can't see them, except if he twists around in their tiny bathroom until it looks like he's a puppy chasing its own tail.

this is so fucking adorable WHAT THE FUCK WOMAN i will never be able to get this image out of my mind

Most of his savings were spent on his new laptop due to the old one meeting a wet death in their sink. It happened when he was a little intoxicated after a student party ( ... )

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REVIEW PART TWO andreaphobia April 19 2011, 13:15:30 UTC
"You are a dead man, Yamamoto Takeshi."

sent shivers down my spine, ok. hibari T_T

And he knows he is staring at his death certificate when he recognises his own ass rocking back and forth between two very familiar thighs.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHSDJFSJLFKJSDJFLSJLJSKFSD

He hangs his head in defeat and waddles into the kitchen. It's the loneliest and coldest night he can remember. He misses everything; Kyouya's warmth, his breath on Takeshi's collarbone when he's too sleepy to push Takeshi away, his unintelligible grumbling whenever he is having a particularly chaotic dream. Everything, really.

this is so fucking sweet & adorable & I CAME

Takeshi tries to melt into the ground, "Please shut up, Lambo. Just take it down, okay? This is private stuff."

Lambo shrugs, "You recorded it with my video camera. So, technically, it's my stuff."

i don't think that's how it works lambo

"Come on!" Takeshi pleads, "My ass is on the line here ( ... )

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REVIEW PART THE LAST andreaphobia April 19 2011, 13:23:04 UTC
After day three of their YouPorn premiere half his course mates are giving him strange looks and Takeshi wants to drop dead when his coach pats him on the back and tells him, "Nice form, Yamamoto."

HAHAHA, NICE. Even his coach jesus christ, you must enjoy watching him suffer

He shambles into the bedroom to collect his sleeping bag but instead he finds Kyouya sitting on the edge of the bed, eyeing him in a way that screams 'Danger, Yamamoto Takeshi! Danger!'.

yamamoto's so whipped and so pathetic and hibari's so dangerous ;_; I LOVE THEM BOTHHHHHHHHHHH

"Your efforts to get this abomination taken down are insufficient." Kyouya says and Takeshi swallows because he doesn't know where this is leading. It's not like this is news to him.

I seriously fucking burst out laughing when Hibari said this line, it's just so... MECHANICAL and yet... HE'S TALKING ABOUT AN AMATEUR PORN VIDEO STARRING HIM LOLlljsdlfjaskldlajsjjsdjsaklsl

Takeshi does, clumsily covering his crotch with his hands in case Kyouya is planning on biting him where it will ( ... )

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Re: REVIEW PART THE LAST amcw177 April 19 2011, 13:37:22 UTC
Allow me to illustrate my reaction in gifs because words fail me at this point.


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Re: REVIEW PART THE LAST andreaphobia April 19 2011, 13:38:19 UTC
WHAT IS THIS I JUST SAW THIS

Entirely andreaphobia's fault who writes this pairing so much better than I ever could ♥.

thanks for the compliment but NO YOU TAKE THAT BACK, RIGHT NOW

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Re: REVIEW PART THE LAST amcw177 April 19 2011, 16:18:17 UTC
No.

:P

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amcw177 April 19 2011, 16:24:07 UTC
ASDFGHKL ♥ YOU ARE TOO KIND.


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amcw177 April 19 2011, 16:55:32 UTC
Oh. OH! Damn. Uh, sorry for the mix-up. /o\ I just love to put my foot in it, apparently. HAHA

Thank you so much! *blushes*

Yes! Yes, I did and I loved all of it dearly! I probably left incoherent comments too. That was me, yep XD

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