[FIC] More than the Less You Say.

[allira_dream]

Title: More than the Less You Say.
Fandom: Full Metal Alchemist (manga)
Warnings: Tentacle, non-con, shota. Spoilers for chapter 72.
Characters/couples: manga!Pride/Riza Hawkeye.
Summary: A whisper of chill running down her skin, between her clothes, is something that anyone would dismiss.
Rating: NC17.
Notes: ... I'll just go and take shelter,

Comments

[fujurpreux]

1) You did it! Yay! =D
2) Very creepy and very good! :D Beautifully nightmare-ish-ly and, did I mention creepy? I give you the thumbs up and a e-cookie.

[allira_dream]

It was the Afrinex' fault. *coffcoffcoff*

Yay, cookie!

[anat_astarte]

Oh yes, you captured nightmarishly creepy quite well! The last line made for an especially powerful visual of the futility of her efforts.

[allira_dream]

Thank you! And yes. After Pride came to play, I'm even more worried about Hawkeye than before. Eeep.

[renuki]

Dude...

That was creepy. (Poor Riza.)

Pride scares me. D:

[allira_dream]

I did try not to write this when I got the idea at first when Pride appeared...

And then chapter 72 all but gave me its blessings D=

And Pride scares me too. In a way that I sort of stare at the pure unadultured evil as far away as I can.