[FIC] Made to be Broken.

[allira_dream]

Title: Made to be Broken.
Fandom: Loveless.
Warnings: Sliiiight undertones of D/s, almost nothing.
Characters/couples: Soubi/Ritsuka.
Summary: "You say that you get pleasure from my orders," Ritsuka challenges. "Well, then show me!"
Rating: R/NC17
Notes: Written for springkink: Loveless, Soubi/Ritsuka: Power shifts - "harder"

Comments

[umbrellaofdoom]

I read all three of the Soubi and Ritsuka ones you posted over on the Loveless community. I loved them all! Very well written, very hot. ^_^ Good work. :D

[allira_dream]

Thank you! These were fun to write.

[aylaranzz]

Loved it! You captured them perfectly.

[allira_dream]

Thank you!

[mousapelli]

this is very sweet, I really like how it plays on Ritsuka's inability to truly understand what Soubi gets out of being a Fighter and following the orders of his Sacrifice. It's fun to see him trying to understand in different ways though, in varying degrees of success.

And also, it's hot. Yay!

[allira_dream]

I think that Soubi and Ritsuka will end up sort of pulling at each other, giving up in small ways to keep each other happy. Which still will take them their sweet time to get there, but still.

Thank you! I suffered so much with this one. Soubi says that Fighter+Giving Orders=Mistake in the system. Loudly.

[tadashi_chan]

That was so well written. I dunno what else to say, but I'm definitely gonna take a look at your other fics. :D

(I'm gonna go find some ice and cool down now...)

[mellu_neko]

Lovely! Thanks!

[allira_dream]

Thanks for reading!