Comments | allira_dream: [FIC] Hypnotized By A Strange Delight.

allira_dream

[FIC] Hypnotized By A Strange Delight.

May 15, 2007 04:51

Title: Hypnotized By A Strange Delight.
Fandom: Loveless.
Warnings: Shota-ish, masturbation.
Characters/couples: Ritsuka/Soubi.
Summary: It seems an eternity before Ritsuka starts smiling again.
Rating: R/NC17.
Notes: Written for springkink: Loveless, Ritsuka/Soubi: Gentle sex - during summer. Also, Ritsuka is 13 for this.

( Hypnotized By A Strange Delight. )

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Comments 10

aylaranzz July 30 2007, 08:32:07 UTC

Loved it! It was perfect. I think it's clear that even if he doesn't say it, Ritsuka loves Soubi.

allira_dream August 1 2007, 02:07:44 UTC

Thank you! And I certainly think so, but the 'L' word makes Ritsuka hissy and ansty, so he tries to avoid it.

mousapelli July 30 2007, 15:09:41 UTC

eeeeee, Ritsuka. I love how adorable he is, all riled up and grumpy. and what exactly DID he tell his grandmother, lol? I can only imagine.

allira_dream August 1 2007, 02:05:51 UTC

He's like a black kitten with the fur all hissy-puffy =D, only then yous scratch his chin and the kitten purrs loudly and is putty on your lap.

Well, at first it was just vague phrases - I met one of Seimei's friend, Seimei's friend was here today, Agatsuma-san showed me a picture today, Agatsuma-san paints. Soubi-san is annoying. - AND then he mostly complained. A lot. And said that he was Seimei's 'friend'. So grandma Aoyagi more or less thought the BL-tangent of the business which worried her at first but she more or less decided that Ritsuka seemed happier than she had seen him since before Seimei died and that as far as she could tell, Soubi honestly cares for Ritsuka and she's sticking to the theory Ritsuka told her (He and Seimei were friends and since he knew how much Seimei worried about him, he's taking care of Seimei's little brother. Coff.)

wintermist_cat August 3 2007, 06:32:10 UTC

Heh, it's fun to find out what Grandma thought about it all. It makes sense! :D

Thanks for elaborating on this bit i was also very curious about! XD

ekaterin24 July 31 2007, 14:22:34 UTC

Oh, this is sweet and good.

allira_dream August 1 2007, 01:56:12 UTC

Thank you!

tadashi_chan August 3 2007, 23:03:50 UTC

Absolutely loved it. It's a perfect blend of cute (a vacation) and hot (well... you know.)

Keep it up! :D

purinsesukyccu February 3 2010, 21:32:35 UTC

Aw, so sweet =n_n=
I love your way to describe everything, especially the details (e.g. the watermelon - ftw!)
Looking forward to read your other fanfics! :)

Kyccu