[FIC] Popcorn Buttered Fingers.

[allira_dream]

Title: Popcorn Buttered Fingers.
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou.
Warnings: Fluff.
Pairings/Characters: Conrad/Yuuri.
Rating:G.
Summary: Yuuri really hopes no one ever asks him when he knew he was in love. Somehow, it sounds really uncool to say 'while I was watching anime'.
Notes: Written for the kkm_vday exchange. I'd ask who knew it was mine but, again: I

Comments

[alchfaerie05]

Love over popcorn! That is SO romantic! Haha, I am turning into a Con X Yuu fan more and more everyday.

[allira_dream]

*giggles* It's a lovely couple, but I enjoy just about every couple in KKM.

[arctic_dragon]

Ah, Yuuri, so awkward with his emotions.
I think you captured him perfectly, well, captured both of them perfectly really.
Greatly enjoyed Jennifer's brief appearance, very fun...oh and so are the star wars jokes.
:)
There were a couple of sentences in there where I got a bit confused as to what was happening because of a missing comma or two, can't copy and paste to show where, however as something in your formatting, livejournal and/or the universe at large has issues with my highlighting.
Also: who does has his eyes over the screen err...I read it as "who does have his eyes on the screen" although you might have meant some thing different.

This made me feel ever so much brighter. I love fics like this thankyou.

[allira_dream]

Thank you so much for reading, and pointing out the last typo!

About the commas, I've to say that in this fic, I did it with full intention of this happening; in some fics, I like it for them not only to have the point of view of the character, but also their voice and, in this case, the way Yuuri rambles.

But I'll check on this later to see if one of those times perhaps was lack of care on my part rather than 'creativity'.

Again, thanks for reading! ^^