Comments | allira_dream: [FIC] For The Future.

allira_dream

[FIC] For The Future.

Oct 18, 2006 00:45

Title: For The Future.
Fandom: Naruto.
Warnings: None.
Characters/couples: Yondaime, baby!Naruto, Rin; Naruto, Sakura.
Summary: “You’ll be a hero.” Yondaime whispers, gently brushes his fingers over his son’s forehead,
Rating: PG.
Notes: Written for fic_on_demand

( For The Future. )

fic: naruto

Comments 14

whimsicality October 18 2006, 02:01:19 UTC

The wording seemed a bit off in a few places, but it was very sweet! ^^ Nice job.

allira_dream October 20 2006, 18:24:08 UTC

Thank you both for the heads up and for reading ^^

dark1977 October 18 2006, 04:03:58 UTC

Awww! They are just so in character! I'm really falling in love with this fic. ^_^

Great job! *dragging away to the memoris*)))

allira_dream October 20 2006, 18:23:32 UTC

Thanks! ^^

asimi October 18 2006, 05:16:45 UTC

I liked this a lot. =] Well done.

allira_dream October 20 2006, 18:13:55 UTC

Thanks! ^^

blakrose_eris October 18 2006, 14:05:51 UTC

That was really good. Thanks for sharing.

allira_dream October 20 2006, 18:04:39 UTC

Thanks for reading ^^

kireiko October 18 2006, 15:27:20 UTC

Very nicely done. Very sweet near the end and especially with Naruto at the end... I can totally see that happening. I really enjoyed it.

Good work.

^_____^

~kir

allira_dream October 20 2006, 18:04:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.