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allforleyna

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Jul 11, 2005 10:53

Last night I sat down and decided to just write and ended up with this.

( Fairly long: in Word, about two pages double-spaced. Don't feel obliged to read it, but I thought it might interest some people, specifically Iowa people. )

writing

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jaydreaming July 11 2005, 17:19:47 UTC

I want to know what's going to happen next! Keep writing!

(I realize that wasn't very constructive advice. If you're looking for really nit-picky proofreading, I'm willing to do that, but I figure this is just spilling out of you...it's pretty rocking. :))

I am writing this from a coffee house in Iowa. nerdiparadise July 12 2005, 00:02:03 UTC

Good jerb there, eh?

Re: I am writing this from a coffee house in Iowa. allforleyna July 12 2005, 00:11:22 UTC

Which coffeehouse?

Re: I am writing this from a coffee house in Iowa. nerdiparadise July 12 2005, 00:12:47 UTC

Javablah.

Re: I am writing this from a coffee house in Iowa. allforleyna July 12 2005, 00:15:18 UTC

The Tobacco Bowl was my favorite. It's in the Pedmall. Very cool, bright red walls, quirky people.

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androgynous_ken July 16 2005, 05:42:09 UTC

i love it. The deer imagery is cool. I'd date someone for their voice alone. And I'm listening to Neutral Milk Hotel.