Obi/Ani obssesive! First slash fic!

[alley_skywalker]

Wee! Ok my first e-net journal! Well may I say that I am a crazy Star Wars fan and out of all of SW my fave thing will have to be of course Obi/Ani. Well Anakin in general but Obi/Ani something SO PERFECT. I was never in love with Slash stuff until they came along. Now here I am posting my first Obi/Ani slash fic. This one's all said and all...

Comments

[masterglory]

This is perfect for this raining day. Beautiful, sad hopeless story.

Welcome, baby

[alley_skywalker]

Yes sad fics are great for rainy days aren't they?
Thanks for the comment and welcome :)

[ludagurl3d]

Alley!! it's me Dee. I didn't know you had an LJ lol

I'm friending you!

Love the fic! so sad, but you wrote it so well!

[alley_skywalker]

Hey, Dee! I didn't know you had a LJ? I though you said you didn't? Hmmm... LYER! Lol nah. I'm so new to this lol. It does post your comments BTW I just have to unscreen them or reply to them.

[ludagurl3d]

LOL I think when I told you that I didn't have an LJ back then. i just got one at the end of the summer I think tee hee! I'm glad you have one too!!

[alley_skywalker]

Oh yea? Cool then.
Yea I got this one a while ago but didn't like write much or w/e. Yea I think I'm gonna put up some of my social news in here too and just put it under a friends filter. lol.
Oh do you like the blue color this is in? I love the blue color this is in! lol.

Hello There!

[ani_harths_obi]

Welcome to Livejournal! (I'm pretty new myself! :)

I loved this story! It's one of those ones that's really short but works. I love the way the ending mirrors the beginning and apart from the odd spelling mistake, this is an all round great fic!

Jedi love!
xxx

Re: Hello There!

[alley_skywalker]

Thanks :) I love things that come around full circle...sort of my attempt at a lyrical prose...hee!

[alley_skywalker]

Oh it's not my last! And I hope I'll be able to write somehing good like this :) It's the "stick to what you know" method. I've done het angst for a while now so I kinda knew what I was doing here lol.

I love the tech analises! So the more the better lol.

Eep! I knew I forgot something...yea I'll edit and stick that disvlaimer in there.

Thanks for commenting!

[temple_mistress]

*channels Obi!voice* Hello, there!

It's so great to see new authors in the fandom and on this comm, thanks for sharing with us!

This is a very well-written angsty little thing! I really enjoyed the style you used--full of emotion, description, and very vividly detailed. I'm a visual writer, so I love it when I see other authors doing it--I love being transported right into the fic simply by being able to "see" it.

Tell me, oh Perfect One, have you ever loved anyone? Have you ever wanted to hold onto some one and never let go? I worshiped you long before I loved you. I loved you long before I needed you. I needed you long before I lost you.

That was a wonderful progression in Anakin's thoughts--sad and poignant and so achy!

Ok, and admittedly, I'm a sucker for Anakin, a lightsabre, and katas so... :D

I do hope you will continue to write more to share with us! Welcome to the fandom!

TM

[alley_skywalker]

Hey! Don't i know you from fanfiction.bet? I write under Alley parker or Jedi Padawan there. You'r the author of "Do What You Have To Do" right?

I'm glad you like it :) Thanks for the welsome!

And I love Ani with a lightsaber too!

[temple_mistress]

I'm one in the same, lol. Good to see you over here--I thought your name seemed familiar, too.

Just KEEP WRITING!!! Our fandom needs a good kick in the pants, and this is a great addition.

*waves*