[dbsk] the fallen (2/3)

[allegorein]

The Fallen [2/3]
Yoochun/Junsu
1500 words

Junsu finds a bruised man during a rainy day. The man claims to be Yoochun, a descendant of the Majeh* and a succubus**, but damned by both heaven and hell with a bounty on his head. And for saving his life, he grants Junsu just one wish.
(Based on the manga, Ororon.)

Part I.

Comments

[missyoosu]

What a sad ending for Yunjae's love story. T_T
Thanks for the update.

[allegorein]

i felt like inserting a bit of yunjae here and i just thought that was the best way to do it. thank you for reading! :)

[purplehyacinth8]

omoshiroi!!!
this is by far, one if the most interesting fantasy au that I stumbled upon. please write more!

[allegorein]

thanks! :D what's really interesting is where this story was based on (ororon) since i took the plot from that manga. do it read it if you have the time~

[taembomb]

this is soooo good- im so happy you updated!
yunjae's love was tragic );
yoochun-ah, junsu loves you and you promised him you'll be with him forever, so come back!
thank god that changmin and jaejoong is there for junchan
update soon! :D

[allegorein]

we'll see in the next part if yoochun can keep his promise to junsu, but at least junsu has changmin & jaejoong to keep him steady until then. and thank you for reading! :)

[roughmetal2]

this is really good. i hope you would write the third part soon. since yunjae had a sad ending, i hope you'd make a happy one for yoosu though i don't know how it can be without yoochun receiving any punishment from the demon king.

[allegorein]

yoochun is the demon king now (his father had already passed the throne to him) that's why the others are out to kill him so that they can't dethrone him. and ahhh i can't promise anything for now! but i'll definitely try to finish writing the third part and make it as hopeful as possible~

[rinmi]

Ahh I really like the way u write. :) hope to see the last part n more of ur yoosu. Cough cough this fandom need more writers ;;

[allegorein]

thank you! :D and yea, this part has very little yoosu, if any. it serves more as a bridge to connect the background/history to the current situation. the third part will have more background story for junsu and the reuniting of yoochun & junsu~

[rinmi]

ohh nice~ am predicting junsu is 'the fallen' one? hehe i hope yoosu will be together at the end. junsu will forgive him.. and ahh my heart begging to for jaemin to end up together as well even though i know thats unlikely OTL

[allegorein]

'the fallen' one may be one person or another depending on how you look at the whole picture. ;) i've actually dropped slight hints of jaemin in this fic, because i think jaejoong kind of deserves a little happiness, but we'll see! the third part might actually come out later than what i'm targeting for since i'm writing an exo fic right now and it's quite possibly the longest fic i've written to date adshglkasdhg.