Comments | all_my_sees: [Thursday, Feburary 19th][Iwatodai train station][Early morning]

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[Thursday, Feburary 19th][Iwatodai train station][Early morning]

Feb 21, 2009 06:14

[Minami sat in his Gekkoukan school uniform with an open book on his lap, listening to the sound of trains failing to arrive. He had claimed a bench, which was lucky enough, because his bag was heavy with books (and while that wouldn't give him any trouble) it would be awkward standing in the crowd with it, bumping into them ( Read more... )

chiko, jun, chieko, minami, !iwatodai, michi, #in-person, chika, ray, paru

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pokeitwithatwig February 20 2009, 23:51:05 UTC

[There's a boy n the high school uniform, and he's sitting on a bench quickly doing his homework. Feel free to notice that his grammar seems to be failing in his rush to complete it.]

justifiesme February 20 2009, 23:53:19 UTC

[He wouldn't normally comment, but... That's almost painfully bad.]

You're muddling up the syntax.

pokeitwithatwig February 22 2009, 02:47:50 UTC

Huh? How?

[looking down at his work to try to find the errors and correct them, but he's just not seeing it.]

justifiesme February 23 2009, 02:50:54 UTC

Here, and here.

[Pointing.]