We're Almost to the End

[alizep]

“Minako!” A girl’s voice called out to her. “We’re going to be late!” Makoto ran past her down the long hallway wearing a sleeveless pink gown that was held up by silken straps tied behind her neck, the ends trailing softly down her exposed back.
Rei came up from behind her and pulled on her right arm, dragging her down the white halls, the brown

Comments

[death_of_dreams]

God that's beautiful, in a way.

In a way I want more but am mostly satisfied...

Very nice. Am friending your journal - your fic snippets and ficlets are awesome. ^^

[alizep]

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked this entry - it was my favorite one to write.

Please friend away!

[sheankelor]

Very well written The descriptions (the parts most people have to nag at me to fill in) are very rich here.

[alizep]

I have a tendency to get dialog heavy when I write. It took a lot of smacking myself to get all the details in there.

Thanks for commenting!

[lovelylytton]

This one was amazing. Do you know that scene in Titanic, at the very end of the film, when everyone who died is standing in that entrance room of the ship? Always tears me up. Same thing with your fic. Loved it.

[alizep]

Oh yes! If I could give this ficlet a soundtrack, it would include the last song being played by the orchestra just as the Titanic is about to sink. Now I need to go home and dig out that DVD....

[lovelylytton]

That song fits this ficlet perfectly. But it would make me even more teary, so it's a good thing that it's 'only' words.
On an unrelated sidenote: Your icon is so pretty, were did you get it?

[alizep]

dark_branwen made this one. There are a lot more that she had made and posted on actor_icon.

http://community.livejournal.com/actor_icon/