I knew something was up from this line onwards and the revelation surely didn't disappoint: Peace and prosperity was enjoyed by those of the blue planet.
The set-up was just too perfect, and when you described the sweet and quiet way in which Endymion made love to Serenity, I know the big bang wasn't far away. I wasn't expecting an angry and wild affair with Venus, but you know how much I like this constellation, so YAY to you for writing it.
I like how Venus thrives on the danger of being discovered, how Endymion doesn't know whether or not there's something going on with her and Kunzite and then Endymion throwing up in the morning after Serenity is gone. Excellent, my dear, excellent!
but you know how much I like this constellation, so YAY to you for writing it. I have a secret love of this ship as well. I don't know what it is - but the two of them need to have more smut-ness!
I'm glad that you liked this. I had the wonderful seathoughts to help me clean this up when I started to go too far off course.
I find it interesting how Endymion's separated all the 'bad' emotions and impulses from his daytime persona so they come out in the night and in this affair with Venus (I'd love to have a story from her POV and wonder what's driving her into this affair).
He hated himself for returning to her, tainted with another woman’s scent. In the morning he would be greeted with a kiss and smile. Once she was gone he would rush to the bathroom and get sick over the sink.
Somehow I think this is going to kill him one day if it makes him physically nauseous. But then he's also jealous of Kunzite for something that might not even exist! Poor Endymion, always complicating things.
And I was only able to finish this little drabble because of your wonderful assistance!!!
The second part was meant to be from Venus's perspective, but it didn't turn out that way. But there is a third part that I have in mind. Let's see if the muses will let me write it...
*jawdrop* Alize... you... what the...?! *can't process thoughts having just been fed her Endy/Venus kink*
I am both impressed and disgusted by the contradictory treatment of Serenity and Venus, and would really love to read more about this side of Endymion. And then of course, seconding Starsea above, want to know Venus's POV about things as well. You have created a really intriguing, though twisted, relationship here. Consider me a humble fangirl. (which translates to "I want more Alizefic!")
You bad bad woman you! You made Endymion cheat on his beloved Serenity! And Venus looks like a homewrecker! But it's like a trainwreck... You just can't tear your eyes away from it. Is there any chance we might see more of this story?
Is there any chance we might see more of this story? There is a second chapter posted, and I have every intention of posting a third one. Not sure if it's going to take place before or after this one though. So many choices. Happy to hear from you!
^^;; You delight in giving me fics that I love because you are a truely fantastic writer and I generally love everything you write, but at the same time I have to hate because ... well Endy is cheating on poor Serenity >.> ^___^ I love the descriptions and well everything. Great work!! I, as much as I hate to say it, like the others above would welcome more of this because it fascinates me ...
It is one of those secret meetings that you don't want to admit to want to reading about but find that once you start you can't stop...lol. Glad that you liked this!
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Peace and prosperity was enjoyed by those of the blue planet.
The set-up was just too perfect, and when you described the sweet and quiet way in which Endymion made love to Serenity, I know the big bang wasn't far away. I wasn't expecting an angry and wild affair with Venus, but you know how much I like this constellation, so YAY to you for writing it.
I like how Venus thrives on the danger of being discovered, how Endymion doesn't know whether or not there's something going on with her and Kunzite and then Endymion throwing up in the morning after Serenity is gone. Excellent, my dear, excellent!
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I have a secret love of this ship as well. I don't know what it is - but the two of them need to have more smut-ness!
I'm glad that you liked this. I had the wonderful seathoughts to help me clean this up when I started to go too far off course.
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He hated himself for returning to her, tainted with another woman’s scent. In the morning he would be greeted with a kiss and smile. Once she was gone he would rush to the bathroom and get sick over the sink.
Somehow I think this is going to kill him one day if it makes him physically nauseous. But then he's also jealous of Kunzite for something that might not even exist! Poor Endymion, always complicating things.
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The second part was meant to be from Venus's perspective, but it didn't turn out that way. But there is a third part that I have in mind. Let's see if the muses will let me write it...
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Alize... you... what the...?!
*can't process thoughts having just been fed her Endy/Venus kink*
I am both impressed and disgusted by the contradictory treatment of Serenity and Venus, and would really love to read more about this side of Endymion. And then of course, seconding Starsea above, want to know Venus's POV about things as well. You have created a really intriguing, though twisted, relationship here. Consider me a humble fangirl. (which translates to "I want more Alizefic!")
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Ditto!
I'm glad that you liked this. There will definitely be more to come.
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There is a second chapter posted, and I have every intention of posting a third one. Not sure if it's going to take place before or after this one though. So many choices. Happy to hear from you!
(Where's my fic?!?!?!)
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