New Divide

[alizep]

Comments

[jenbunny]

That was ... I really enjoyed that. Kind of sad and lonely, but I really enjoyed reading it.

[alizep]

Thank you! It took a few attempts and many versions, but I was glad to finally get this completed. (And even more glad that you liked it!)

[lovelylytton]

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Alizep!
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JKDJHGJHGJHFGJHGSHHGAFHEJJDKHGCJV!
THIS IS BRILLIANT! Mamoru has them killed because he knows that they will fight alongside the Dark Moon family and KLJKJDHJF.
I will have to read this again at a later point so that I can leave you a review with more than random letters in it, but girl, this is GOOD! It's excellent, it's very well written (not that I've come to expect anything else from you ;P), and the plot kills me.

[alizep]

My fav part of your comment was the "HGAFHEJJD". :)

I'm really glad you liked this!

[lovelylytton]

I thought that might be your favourite bit. *winks*

I'm still in awe of this. What inspired to you write this?
*wants details*

[alizep]

I've actually have some ideas bouncing around in my head about the Shitennou's betrayal in the Sil Mil - and while I meant to write this in that time period, this came out first. But I'm hoping to go back and write the Sil Mil version next!

[supercutefoxy]

...That was brain-stopping good. sad though. but...nope sorry, coherent thoughts are beyond me at this time. It was that good.

[alizep]

Thank you! It was very hard for Mamoru to have to make this choice again.

[ellorgast]

...Oh wow, this is haunting. The idea that the Shitennou agree with the Dark Moon for the exact reason they rebelled the first time. That Mamoru not only had them killed, but did it before they even had the chance to betray him. Wow. Just wow.

[alizep]

I don't even know if the Shitennou knew that they would have stood besides the Dark Moon clan. But it sounds like a fic idea!

Glad you liked this!